Becoming Usopp

GOD!!!!!!!!

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Harem please.

This story is basically just usssop with a worst personality., bland character ,plot that only works for ussop, with same canno story just with little bit exta stuff

Whyyyyyy?! why transmigrate someone from earth into the body of Sanji, and then have him get Vivi??? you sir author are a cuck.

I tried my best to read through this, as I was interested in seeing a story from the POV of Usopp. However, the writing quality, and character interactions via others or self, are too much to try and push through. I would recommend using Grammarly to help you with this.

in the middle of the story the author simply made ANOTHER transmigrator take over Sanji's body

This is good but it feels quite rushed overall i haven't read enough to make a proper review but the interactions between the people seemed quite cold and not human-like. The story is a fresh idea which I have not seen be used which is being reincarnated into Usopp. I know that through writing this and through more criticism your work may become better but it does feel a bit off. I hope this story can honor god Usopp well and wish you luck through this journey.

It's not good. Just Usopp being the MC instead of all strawhats. It just got dull when all interactions feels like characters from Xianxias, and everything is just rehash. Nothing new explored, aside from the female characters body.

the story was pleasantly good, until another person from our world entered Sanji's body. Stories with two transmigrators are boring and very tiring. But my rating for the story is still 5 stars, despite having to abandon it. It was an excellent read.

Reveal Spoiler

Ussop should go to Nami Island and kill Arlong.

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i previously gave 5 stars for this...but now i deleted that 5 star and giving this 1 star. like for real bruh you just destroyed this story by having xianxia soul takeover sanji's body...not cool man. so like 2 transmigrator and other one is evil...hayysss

That fool, how could he believe someone like Usopp was a weakling, does he not realize that the true strength behind the Straw Hats is God Usopp. All jokes aside, he should possess some innate talent with him being the son of someone worthy of being a Yonko's crew Officer. Anyways hopefully with some experience he can work his way into unlocking Observation Haki early what with his sniping talents, maybe before the Arabasta Arc, I mean he has a decent amount of time before then and it would not be too out there if he got it around Whisky Peak or Little Garden. Going to give it a 4.5 which may change later on.