The old ones say we Spartans are descendent from Heracles himself. Leonidas gives testament to our bloodline. But Timaeus, his tale is different. If Leonidas is a son of Heracles. Then he is the son of Poseidon.
amazingly done so far
how far is the story going because as far as I have seen I don't what it to end after just 50chps it will disappointing.
2 years ago
13
R0berto
The idea is good but you skip a lot of things and I feel like the character is empty and the world is not planning so well since you skip the supernatural until you finish counting the 300th movie.
2 years ago
12
SAUVAGE_JF
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2 years ago
11
Drop_Bear
I’m really loving this book right now love what you have done with the whole Sparta era I’ve looking for books like this and it just makes me happy to be able to read this from time to time thanks so much!
2 years ago
7
TreacherousVoid
This novel has annoyed me more times than I can count, and has a few flaws BUT I also have thoroughly enjoyed this!
It’s action packed and full of CHAD energy B)
Not to mention the author just randomly threw The Lord of the Abyss, The Dark King, The God of Symbiotes, KNULL himself!!! Into the novel out of nowhere.
Ive never even seen him mentioned in a novel before. Which is insane because he is the void itself, the first thing to exist….it is fugging terrifying to think about, and this author just randomly brought him into the story 😭 a multiversal level entity big chilling in a cave. 😭
Jokes aside, The story is fuggin awesome and I have no idea why I hadn’t discovered it sooner.
TAKE my POWER STONES
2 years ago
4
TBJ5K
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3 months ago
2
Kazvx
ROMANCE MC and Amaterasu
2 years ago
2
L_y_n_x
Very good with a very novel premise that I've not seen in a marvel fanfic.
Good Good Good Good Good
Good. ÷ e . g. s
I fully agree with your decision on not having Triton killed, and how Mc's conflict prevented him from taking the path the gods have taken many times in the pursuit of revenge.
2 years ago
1
ShodaiKokyu
Interesting story, good world background, cool character design. The story concept is really good, but the execution is kinda flawed, sometimes it's perfect and sometimes it's rushed. A bit confusing if i must say so. But overall perfect for fanfiction
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amazingly done so far how far is the story going because as far as I have seen I don't what it to end after just 50chps it will disappointing.
The idea is good but you skip a lot of things and I feel like the character is empty and the world is not planning so well since you skip the supernatural until you finish counting the 300th movie.
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I’m really loving this book right now love what you have done with the whole Sparta era I’ve looking for books like this and it just makes me happy to be able to read this from time to time thanks so much!
This novel has annoyed me more times than I can count, and has a few flaws BUT I also have thoroughly enjoyed this! It’s action packed and full of CHAD energy B) Not to mention the author just randomly threw The Lord of the Abyss, The Dark King, The God of Symbiotes, KNULL himself!!! Into the novel out of nowhere. Ive never even seen him mentioned in a novel before. Which is insane because he is the void itself, the first thing to exist….it is fugging terrifying to think about, and this author just randomly brought him into the story 😭 a multiversal level entity big chilling in a cave. 😭 Jokes aside, The story is fuggin awesome and I have no idea why I hadn’t discovered it sooner. TAKE my POWER STONES
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ROMANCE MC and Amaterasu
Very good with a very novel premise that I've not seen in a marvel fanfic. Good Good Good Good Good Good. ÷ e . g. s
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I am not a avid reviewer and can’t really say anything others haven’t already said. So I’ll just say give it a try. 10/10 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I fully agree with your decision on not having Triton killed, and how Mc's conflict prevented him from taking the path the gods have taken many times in the pursuit of revenge.
Interesting story, good world background, cool character design. The story concept is really good, but the execution is kinda flawed, sometimes it's perfect and sometimes it's rushed. A bit confusing if i must say so. But overall perfect for fanfiction