Tensura: A Cat's Life. [DROPPED]

Overall, not that bad of a start. A few repetitions here and there, but not that many grammatical errors. Would 100% recommend using Grammarly(the free browser extension), it should iron out quite a bit of writing inconsistencies.

ini adalah salah satu fanfic terbaik yang saya baca. saya hanya berharap kalau ini tidak Harem. bagus kalau MC nya setia. saya benar benar muak sama yang namanya Harem. saya berpikir bagaimana, ... bisa mencintai orang lain jika kamu sudah mencintai seseorang. apakah itu bahkan bisa di sebut cinta atau ketertarikan lawan jenis.

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The story is interesting, the main character is not boring. Grammar is fine. The update speed is so-so. The speed of narration is optimal. But, in general, to all those who are not against non-traditional orientation (personally, I did not like it) between men. I recommend reading it. And those who are looking for romance / harem men with women (such as me :D). It is better to skip and not waste time (although you can read it for general development).

I highly recommend this fanfic tbh it’s one of my favourite fanfics the pairing is mc x rimuru and there is a butterfly affect Writing quality: one of the better ones from what I’ve seen so far Updating stability: at least 1-3 a week from what I’ve seen so far Story development: the mc’s actions changes things in the cannon plot Character development: the mc Lucifer is a pretty interesting guy and I like his interactions with rimuru expecially when he teases rimuru World background: tensura enough said about it

These are my honest ratings for my first story!! But let me know if y’all see any things I can improve!! Also give me y’all feedback about how y’all feel about the story!

Guys! Don't get fooled by the sypnosys! This novel is actually so much better! Please keep up the good work Author-san!👍👏👏😆

Tbh it’s the best tensura fanfic I’ve read the thing I love the most tho is the dynamic between mc and rimiru Lucifer x rimiru FTW!

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I LOVE THIS ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Great story, good progression, keep up the good work

Well the plot is great, and I like how the MC does not just follow Rimuru around, like some other fanfic. But I do have a small problem with the writing style. Some times when the MC does something the writer will write it as "Lucifer then released his aura" instead of something like "A furious blue aura appeared as lucifer stepped forward".-This is just something I made up so you could understand. Another thing that I feel can be more flushed out is the dialog, I feel that when a character speaks its a little bit rushed and some of the dialog feels forces. Basically to sum it all up the author is doing a lot of 'telling' Instead of 'showing', and that some of the dialog is a bit rushed. But overall I think the rest of this fic is great, and my only grouch with it can easily be fixed with some practice.

,, 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💯💯💯💯💞💞💞💞💞 Nice fic✌️