Reincarnated as a Dragoness
Yuna, a 20-year-old girl after a desperate attempt to go to college and drop out, depressed and eventually was murdered by a mysterious figure and brought into a world where she did again attempt to reach peace as her destiny brought forth her the exact opposite.
She was reincarnated into another world called Astreral a magical world that is under attack by void a mysterious force with the ability to corrupt creatures of other realms.
She finds herself in a world presented with obstacles and dangerous monsters. Her only way to live peacefully was to become stronger and capable. As she wanders around endlessly desperately trying to find a place to settle and live her life in peace how she always wanted, however, trouble will find her.
I wanted to tell this story as best as I can I would love it if everyone enjoyed it too, so please leave a comment and tell me how I can improve it would be much appreciated and I am interested in this story and how it would play out.
Indeed this is my first story but I wanted to make a universe with multiple stories and main characters that will be inside different stories and bodies.
It was really fun to read I loved every second an part of the story sadly I think the creator might be busy or something I wish it would be continued
Just another shameless author rating their own story, I think this story could be build up more hopefully you guys think the same. I'm just trying to improve on my writing, As a summer project I think ill manage to keep this up.
There is a lot of good, emotional writing from the protagonists perspective. I appreciate this humble authors desire to create a sympathetic figure in the first few chaps. Also, a huge fan of the system, everything is clearly stated and neatly organized. As a native english speaker I find grammatical errors sprinkled in here as well as missing words. Since I'm not a professor of English I would recommend you read your story aloud to catch some mistakes. Editors are in short supply these days. All in all the mysterious concepts in Reincarnated as a Dragoness are worth pursuing, and wish this budding author well on their journey.
The plot is good but the SPAG is not...but the plot is good. Nice job author...just a small advise to use Grammarly in the future...it will make it much better
This is a nice idea, I like how the emotions of the mc were written. One thing is that some of the writing shows up in other paragraphs and not in their own which can be confusing.
I like the approach of a the game format, matched with a beast mc. I think it's very interesting read so far. I will follow this obe closely.