Seeing yourself in a fictional world seems like a dream for many. However, finding yourself in a fictional world filled with powerful monsters, mad exorcists and fallen angels isn't pleasant if you're a normal human. The situation is even worse if you are a simple sidekick. In a supernatural world, how far can a human go?
(Obs: English is not my first language. So I apologize in advance for possible errors)
This is a fanfic with a lot of potential. So far the MC has made many rational decisions like suing Issei and Matsuda, getting access to a virtual library full of magic books and much more. It is interesting that the MC is slowly developing without drawing much attention to the results. He's the type that people think is weak, but secretly he's getting really strong. As the author himself said English is not his first language (nor mine lol), but he is doing his best to bring huge chapters almost every day.
So a lot is going on in this fic. It seems to be a mix of bleach, strike the blood and DXD. The plot is progressing nicely. love the personality of Motohama but as the author mentioned English is their second language so the Grammar is not perfect. There is a lot of mix-up between him and her. ____________________________________________________ On a personal note: I'm not a huge fan of what u did with the artifact but it's ok. I can look past that. This type of fanfic is not something I generally read so I'm gonna wait till there are a couple more chapters. ______________________________________________ Keep up the amazing work👍
Большой потенциал, интересная подача, за расширение Лора вселенной респект, но пока непонятно куда будет двигаться сюжет.Большой потенциал, интересная подача, за расширение Лора вселенной респект, но пока непонятно куда будет двигаться сюжет
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It looks pretty good so far, so I'll give it five stars. Keep it up, man! Nice job! ----------------------------------------------------------------------
This fanfic is amazing! The MC doesn't get strong overnight without any explanation. He has to study and train to deserve what power he's getting. I like the personality of the MC and how the author is developing the story.
except the occasional grammar mistakes (like her when it's supposed to be he) The fic is looking good. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
its looking good . .