The Book is dropped

This book isn't bad at all. But there are a few glaring issues. Grammar is decent apart from a few errors, but punctuation is a real issue. I still don't know if the protagonist is a girl or boy, cause you didn't tell us. Story is very unique and nicely paced, but there is still room for improvement

you write really good! creative is a really nice word for this, ill try to read more chapters later. keep it up and good luck to you. [img=recommend]

It has been a while since I last saw a book on webnovel written in first person.. The grammar at the start was very bad but it did improve later on, the writing style too. I like the concept, the cover, and the flow of the story! Keep it up man.

first of all the cover is soo great. story is interesting and creative the character development is cool the plot is soon to tell, good luck for the future.

Descriptive and creative in character, story plot to soon to tell, but I can tell this story has a lot kg potential and so does the author, thank you for sharing your story, well done author

Quite shameless I am... Everybody does this you know the gist, the author giving himself 5 stars even though being a 3rd rate writer wishing to one day be amazing at it. Well I hope I do a decent enough job to fullfill your wishes

Cover art is good and the title itself is intriguing From the little I've read, the author is good. Beautiful description and scenes that are captivating. I plan on not skipping the prologue 👍🏿

Author, l really do like your book, it's really quite interesting to read, love the cover too and the characters as well, the book really do look promising 🙂 🙂🙂

Good story. It was a little confusing in the beginning, but the plot is okay and characters are developed fine. Grammar needs some work but otherwise good job author

To be honest it took me a while to realize there was 20 chapters of prologue focusing on whatever was happening with a guy with the same name or whatever, but I found myself enjoying it a ton so give it a read it deserves it because it has a lot of potential.

Wow, Astonishing book!! Such a unique plot! I really enjoyed the book! Recommended to all!

So, the story is decent but the prologue is too extended as it could be way better as a freind I just hope you can fix the things the prologue or whatever did wrong and just make the story

Firstly the title of the novel is very poetic —a befitting name for a fantasy novel. Makes one look forward to reading. The story is off to a good start. The characters so far are interesting. Just a bit of work on the grammar and punctuation (makes it a bit hard to read when so many words are running together). The dream setting too is a bit confusing, but I think it's probably due to punctuation again. Welldone!

I also redid the first chapter for it to sit the story a little better, so don't worry if the quality drop happens on chp 2 since I plan on remaking a chapter every 14 or 10 chapters or so

I enjoyed the story. You should give it a chance and read a few chapters at least. It has not been out for a while so I can't say much about the update stability.