In Marvel as The Hive

Hey there, author here! Decided to do a Marvel novel for fun. Keep in mind I'm not aware of every small detail that takes part in the marvel universe and as such some things may seem odd, so just take it as an AU. :) Hope you enjoy.

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Where are the updates? Where is the Author? Please do note drop

Eh justnbot my cup if tea its a solid 3/5 but irs basically a borderline gotta kill them all type of fic kill eat gain DNA lose what but of humanity you had in the first few chapters if your interested in mindless murderhobo this is the fic for you nothing wrong with it so far outside of the MC feels.. I don't know but puppet comes to mind so far and nothing really good either so take it as you will

this marvel is bing chilling im freezing :cold_face: this book was exactly what i needed to keep my uncle away from me. the plot is good and character i love bc i can relate to when I got to frog land in a world with a new power. i was micheal yakson

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interesting concept but ultimately ruined by generic copy and paste mc. I just really don't see the appeal of edgy, no emotion,cocky, mcs. I just find it to be so boring.🫤

4 months amd 28 chapters. Fo i really meed say more. Its good bit not worth getting into because author will just take forever or disappear ......

love it so far but i wish they updated more it’s so good

Here's your 5 Star Author! I've read it and all I can say is that I love it

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It was such a great start and there were no grammar mistakes. The story is interesting and Liliana reminds me of myself, to be honest. Keep it up, Author!

if it will gonna ever be finished see you guys in 20 years😂

interesting concept, but extremely repetitive. MC feeds on low level mutant rejects to build up her strength for a hundred chapters. The MC spends a bit of time being trained by shield, before ditching them to continue feeding on mutants on a larger scale. There's a lot of spelling mistakes. There's also a glaring pothole that the author tried to fill early, but the way it's fixed doesn't make any sense: eating dirt and rocks can gain MC "mass" so that she can evolve and create minions at first, but it's then nerfed: the more she feeds on something, she gets diminishing returns, which makes no sense because of the law of conservation of mass. out also means that her growth is massively unsustainable, and she'll rapidly reach her growth limit before consuming everything on the planet. basically, this story only needs an actual storyline, coherent lore and some proofreading to be great