I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel

This is pretty good. A fairly well written system novel with actual originality, quite a rare find these days. The system isn't overpowered but still feels satisfying to read. The protagonist while somewhat generic is noticeably more chill than the average system protagonist, he isn't constantly referring to China or being a racist or misogynist which is a huge plus. The world building is quite standard, the story is decent and there's nothing to complain about when it comes to the pacing, quality of writing and translation quality, it's all pretty good. In short, it's a well executed novel with a respectable protagonist, system and concept. I'm fond of novels like this one, they aren't the most ambitious but pull off what they're trying to do well enough to be entertaining. 4.25/5

Idk if it’s a harem (kinda gives the vibes(hope it isn’t tbh)) but until it shows otherwise this story’s actually pretty good so far (as of ch. 30). I really hope they pick this novel honestly. Highly recommend as of this moment.

Typical chinese story where problem come after mc to his door even if he stays at home all year around... also its full of young master stuff to the brim... also its no different from typical stupid mc who just won't backoff even if it means getting in trouble.... and author constantly made powerfull enemy coming after our mc one by one for apparant illogical coincidence which makes mc life always under the crisis.....its preety much very very illogical that how even if mc stay at home all the time 1 level higer villain always keep coming after him.

Ch 20 I like the system, it op but not too op short term but could potentially allow mc to reach infinite heights and break limits. The story so far is quite lacking, most characters are quite normal and it seems that arrogant and cliche cultivation characters are rare and distinct be it because of background or simply because they are the Protagonist or realeated to one. Mc is slightly slow and almost everyone else is slightly faster than mc mentally so far except some but it's tolerable. I liked the cheat but other than that nothing is exceptional.

This book is written so weirdly, like it glossed and introduces seemingly important aspects of the story midway with no clarification whatsoever and uses terms that literally no ones ever before in a casual way. It's also weird how Did Maner is 16 and described in a sexual manner, hella strange. I don't get how people praise this book for the fact that it isn't a harem but is 9 okay with sexualizing an actual 16 year old...

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The story is pretty good but the translation is letting it down a lot. The phrases and wording are especially jarring to read. I know I'm complaining but if you're gonna translate a book for people to pay to read, at least make an effort!

The book is decent but the main frustrating thing is the MC is subpar. He causes the reader to get frustrated because he repeatedly falls for simple traps. Over, and over, and over, and then over again. He knows what will happen in the future, he knows who the villains are, and when the invite him to leave the sect or offer him a "gift" he always accepts, falls for the trap, and ends up in a bad situation. This feels super forced.

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Fairly good for the type of story it is. It has the bonus of being a 'cannon fodder' MC VS the 'female protagonist's harem'. Story allows the MC to affect the world by having foreknowledge of the 'story' so that he can change some outcomes such that they fall more in his favor. He is also able to split the world luck by creating a second 'female protagonist'. This should be a good one to pick up.

Story after 83 chapters no spoilers - female MC and her army of c*ckolds somehow remain ignorant that she's c*cking them. The moment male MC says the sky is blue, female MC disagrees and is offended and with male MC, then somehow all the 50 c*ckolds in a 1000 miles know that male MC offended for female MC and plan ambushes for male cannon fodder MC. (eye roll) The story is definitely infuriating no to mention the NTR by female MC, and some subtle undertones of NTR for male MC. MC not interested in romance starts it anyway, MC never sharing any taughts on other characters with other characters is also a big turn off, always saying the bare minimum, dude could just release some truths or smthing and release some strongly worded justice, but yet we remain dissapointed by MCs passiveness. All around infuriating. Then the reading - im not sure if translation, chat GTP or the author, but the sentences are a mess, constant jumps between points. In good noves u know when the info dump starts and can skip it - here its a dumpster fire, u skim over a word and the next paragraph no longer makes sense. Making the story is rly awkward to read, reading it feels like something is constantly off, a big mess.

It's better than I thought it would be. Still not great, though. I give it a "meh".

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TLDR : the story is ok with confusing or adlibbed power structures that can change on a whim. Where I stopped being interested is when the love interest expresses she’s going to cuck/NTR MC and MC doesn’t really care other than to zone out convo. The female love interest said it would be another female ….if that makes anyone feel better. The author writes situations and then jumps further in the story to back track explaining what happened. It’s not the most fun way to read. The author also leaves huge gaps for you to contemplate the meaning of what happened and what was said. It does not work the best for reading translations. I think the author just assumes you understand what jumps they are making. The females in the novel all cultivate the “ruthless method.” so they kill most emotions or can jump from relationship to relationship experiencing life to help cultivate easier. The MC love interest has a dual cultivation method. I don’t know if it’s bad translation or not, but it seems like she has to have other partners to increase her cultivation rank. In later chapters, 134, the female cultivator even says she’s going to “seek out and express her feelings to sister Sun”. The MC even hears it but doesn’t even comment on it other than asking what she means. Which she does not answer. Then the MC zoned out the rest of the convo.