Realms within us
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A long time ago, when Earth cracked open and released a crazy amount of mana mixed with toxic waste, the mana moved around the planet, evolved the wrong creatures, and turned them into beasts in different shapes and sizes, bringing more trouble to humans to fix that mistake.
But the worst was waiting for them. Gates appeared and brought with them the worst enemies, and with that, this world's saviors were called to awaken and take an action to protect their homeland!
When past and present meet, and victims call for evolution, the realms within us will open!
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"Shhhh" a dark grey creature with no eyes and its face almost hidden appeared from nowhere and hushed System 0, "beware of what's within you" its smile grew wider, and scarier, "because when you stare into the abyss, the abyss will stare back at you..."
Those were the words of the strange creature before the Dark Mana master destroyed the planet Earth and recreated everything according to her rules.
What happened afterward? And what awaits everyone?
Very interesting plot and interesting concept. The character seems cool and system 0 is really snarky. I really like the timeline-jumping concept. The only thing that I felt could have been done better is to fix the grammatical errors but that can be fixed using something like Grammarly so no real harm done,
Shameless five stars I rewrote my review because I wanted clearer one for my novel... I first thought of this novel's idea 7 months ago and I was planning to release it after I finish writing my first novel, but here I am! I decided to join Fantasy Contest with this one! When I planned to finally create it, I wanted something different, something we don't see a lot in novels, something VERY unique! And this is how I came up with "Realms within Us"! This novel is unique in its own way, with the weird and mysterious events, actions and other stuff that are left in the shadows until the right time comes! And we mustn't forget the characters with a lot within them and the things that happen to them and will happen too!! I love this novel because I filled it with everything I wanted in a game and action novel, life lessons and things we should remember (I'm talking about history classes guys haha) I did change some stuff but trust me those changes have meanings and will be known in future chapters! Sorry for the long review!!! But I was so excited to explain few things! I'm thankful to all those who added my novel to their library and I'll be more when you vote for me! Also, your opinions and thoughts matter so much for me, it helps me to know how you guys feel about some stuff in every chapter or about the novel in general so please do let me know how you feel about it. And I'm someone who LOVES to interact with my readers, so please do not hesitate! Thank you so much again for choosing my novel and I hope you'll keep supporting it 'till this pretty long journey ends!!