One Day I Woke Up With an Achievment System

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Author: Clutch_Russ
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One day Colt died like every other protagonist. By getting hit by a white truck. "Such a classic way to go out" Colt thought.



Next thing Colt realizes that he woke up and looked at the unfamiliar ceiling and takes in a huge breath to try to wrap his head around things.



[Ding Congratioulations host on completing your first achievement 'First Breath']



[Host receives predecessor memories]



Follow Colt on his journey through life in another world with Love, Money, and of course faceslapping.



First ever time writing something. I am probably really bad but this is just a fun project for me.



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Not my cover art if artists wants me to remove it message me

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meta_ballz

So far so good as you mentioned it'd be a fun project. But need to work on punctuation and create more conversation between characters to not feel like two dimensional. especially when colt interacted with Clara it was so fast and it'd not look good in the long run. Waiting for more..

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Clutch_Russ
Clutch_Russ

First ever book written so let me know if it’ good or not probably won’t be the best thing in the entire world but hope it is good enough for all of u to enjoy!

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