Alternate World: I Started With Two SSS Templates

I don’t know if this is just me, but I have trouble reading the novel. I find myself having to re-read sentences or paragraphs. The flow reading is messed up and the transitions between paragraphs are rough.

1. there is no world building no idea what kind of world it is, planet? plane? what are the countries? how their world got the dungeons and wild monsters. 2. No idea how they got their powers originally. How the level system works. if it is just gaining power and leveling like in a game it's stupid 3. there are no strength, agility, stamina stats.. which means basically mc has infinite stamina which is ridiculous 4 just the idea that they have game like skills and level up by killing without anything like energy gathering or physical training or skill training is stupid. too much is so wrong.. this is like a story in a game. like imagine you play a game in ps5 and this story is the story of the game

Dropped at CH 1, this novel is incoherent rubbish. I don't know if the source material is any good or not but what I do know is that this translation is atrociously bad. I'm noticing a trend with Webnovel, they've started putting out more and more literally unreadable novels and as a reader this blatant disrespect really feels like a slap on the face. I cannot make sense of this below MTL level translation. 0/5

Convoluted, the power system is not well explained, neither is it well introduced, out of nowhere you can apparently engrave runes, engrave ummm bloodlines, and classes??? I thought he already had a class like... bruh, to summarize, it's conbluted, as just corulent as this cumet.

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Not bad, but has an MC of questionable intelligence, and some weird plots that I didn't really like.

The worst in this batch of Trial read. The world building is not well explained like the author to expect us to know it.The power system is also confusing.

The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.

All I can say is that this is fresh despite all the cliché....................................................................................

surprisingly not the worst thing I've read, still, I got to chapter 30 then realised I was lost, I have no idea what's happening or why or even how he's getting stronger, so I just quit

is the mc able to take damage or not, you say in the same sentence multiple times he didn't take any damage yet is somehow fatally wounded? this story makes no sense, and transitions between paragraphs are like getting gut-punched in the brain. Various grammer and spelling errors throughout makes it even worse. If I could give the world building a zero I would, nothing is explained.

Plot twist : Both of the templates are female.

I wish I can give out zero stars. Read upto 40 free chapters so I can say story is not good. You can just skim the fighting scenes and read to to finish 40 chapter faster cause those scene doesnt make much sense and are repetitive - annoying. World building is basically trash.

the are so many character names start with Lin that you will be confused half the time there is no World building