Being in debts might lead some of us to make foolish decisions. Teddy Williams, a young boy who lost his mother to cancer at an early age, experienced the same thing. His mother left him with debts he couldn't pay. He then learned from his best friend Brian about a club called Dream Catcher, where young, attractive males sold their bodies to prominent people such as politicians, actors, businessmen, and so on. In his eagerness to settle his bills and stop being harassed by loan sharks, he went to the club, where he met with Logan Joeng, a mafia member who does not enjoy forging any kind of contact with anyone, intimate or friendship. He has no hesitation about killing people who disturb his peace. He has trust issues and finds it difficult to sleep with just anyone. When he does, he prefers to approach the person he wants to sleep with first, but he despises it when someone is throwing his/her self to him. When Teddy ruined Mr. Joeng's business deal, Mr. Joeng made him his s** slave as a punishment.
After reading a few chapters, I started to like Teddy, and knowing how he loves his mother is absolutely adorbs! Though the novel just needs a touch of grammar and spelling correction, I'm still able to understand the flow. Nevertheless, the novel has a good plot, waiting for more chaps👌🫶.
It is very well-written. I just read the first chapter. And probably gonna continue reading. Your grammar and your vast vocabulary is very amazing.
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The story is good, you should break up some of the paragraphs so you don’t overwhelm your readers but good so far , didn’t see any mishaps.
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