SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS

I’m changing my previous review of 3 stars to five after reading every chapter available so far. This is quite a good story, and the writing draws you in at every angle. I must admit, the beginning chapters were lackluster, but as time went on the quality improved exponentially. For those who are skeptical on whether or not to read this, be patient. The story gets better. Congratulations author, I’m a difficult person to please. Your novel is a work of art.

One of the best fast pacing story. The beginning of the story seem lagging and naive MC is not my taste. But I’m really surprised by how author turned the plot and developed MC. Definitely worthy of time.

This story is very enjoyable to me. I like the descriptions and the differences between most of the characters (good guys and bad). The world building seems pretty solid as well, so far. I am more than a third of the way in and I still get surprised in a good way on the growth and back story for the MC. I have read many novels here and this one is easily in my top 5.

Hello everyone, I hope you guys enjoy the book. As a reader I know the pain of chapter updates. But I promise you i will regularly update the book. *Bonus chapter will be awarded for reaching Power Stones target and Gifts. *No NTR, *Plenty of face-slapping, funking beautiful girls.

The world building is pretty typical for a cultivation novel. Far too many authors notes for my taste, explaining things that should be done through story telling. A plethora of grammar, missing punctuation, and errant word usage. All of which break emersion and distract the reader from the story. That said This is one of the most entertaining cultivation stories I have read to date. The characters seem to have depth, and interact with each other in a believable manner. The plot so far is moving at a decent pace. The writing quality has improved through the course of the story. Also the author doesn't use the character's "cultivation" as cheep page filler, and many writers of this kind of story bore the reader to sleep with it. I for one am looking forward to reading more of the story.

this is a very good book I'm liking all the chapters that I have read so far

I can't say enough good things about this story. It's a great read and a fun story. I had seen this book several times initially, and I hadn't picked it up, but I am glad I did. Nothing more to say than give it a try!

author in the end thea becomes the mc's wife?

There are better books, but this isn't a bad book either................................................................................................

rating for the first 52 ch, I will continue reading when I get some coins and then rereviwe.

Haven’t written one of these in awhile, but Author asked. Chapter release seems stable, but I only started reading the series earlier this month. The story seems to be progressing at a steady pace and shouldn’t be offensive to anyone. Writing quality is generally decent but could use some editing, it’s unfortunate because some plot points get lost in part because the reader second guesses the authors intent at times, for example, a familial relation. The world background could be more robust. Here are the biggest issues, character design is uneven, which is par for the course in Harem stories. Why do these characters like the MC, who are they outside the MC? These questions are answered for some to a certain degree, but not all. I enjoy [Face Slapping] this is the reason I’ve been reading this story, so far it’s been fun. I’m looking forward to the next slap. In short if you enjoy the standard harem and like face slapping then you’ll likely enjoy this book.

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A good read with a nice character development. Really like the pace at which the MC's mentality is changed from the naive boy at the beginning to becoming more mature. Keep up the good work and looking forward to more chaps

Perfect fantasy story to take reader into different worlds with imagination

the storyline is so good and funny 🤣 I love the MC his development and mentality is great. thanks to writer for bringing the MC to live and making my day more enjoyable 😄😌