Ace of Diamond: Return of the Pitcher

Translation is good One of the best Ace of Diamond fanfic i read Currently read still 50 I will whoever like ace of Diamond to give it a try

1)The thing with this LN is that it forgets the fact that sawamura was an major league player even tho it constantly reminds itself the next second they forget it 2)the characters are so hollow it feels like just the name is similar to the character but it feels completely different 3)the level of baseball experience, wisdom , knowledge you expect from sawamura as a major league pitcher is not found 4)while reading you can clearly feel this is an Chinese LN with so many things that don’t make sense 5)the sawamura character is soooooo dumb it gets annoying , yes If he was a teenager then it wouldn’t matter but he has gotten back in time thus there is no behavioural maturity 6) the baseball calls are messed up it feels like sawamura has forgotten his time in major league 7) I’m a huge fan of DnA so I started to read but sorry I can’t take it no more bad writing I would advice you to stay as far away if you don’t want to rage quit

Sebenernya masih ada karakter yang berbeda dari asli nya? kaya akutsu dia seangkatan sama miyuki kenapa disini udah lulus? padahal akutsu nanti nya jadi character penting. trus nishiyama kibo or wang xi ? kukira dia dari china karna di asli nya yui kaoru sama dia saingan di world cup u - 16 tapi setelahnya bagus kok jadi 4.8 / 5

i like it 🙂‍↕️ i like it 🙂‍↕️ i like it 🙂‍↕️

Grammatically, the translation is good. But it feels like a direct translation and as such, the writing feels very low quality wise. Interactions between characters are akwardly written, the characters themselves seem kind of empty and cadly developed, the writing style is “bad chinese novel”. Globally, I’d stay away from this.

Te saltaste muchos capítulos, creo que la cuarta parte de todo el fic, intenté leer tu traducción, pero no se entienden muchas cosas, debido a que no escribiste el comienzo de la historia, no se porque te saltaste todos esos capítulos, cuando son muy importantes, en ellos se describen el entrenamiento que hizo sawamura y la razón de su fuerza

Overall, the translation is good. In this fic Sawamura is a genius, the goat. So id highly recommend to just go ahead and read. . . btw what's the original name of the novel?

Feed me more, Feed me more, Feed me more. I need to know. Awesome storyline. Can't wait for the next update. Especially seeing the growth of the entire team and the twists and turns in the competition. I am excited for the next update

To be honest, I wasn't really planning on reading this fanfic. Why? because of another story I came across with, reviews in that story are bad and it's the same title! Then come to find out it's actually different! 🤦‍♀️ I am really glad I gave it a try and guess what I came love it! Maou Sawamura Eijun 📣, King Seido is the best! The story itself is fast paced, no long monologue nor too much nonsense. In some chapters, I even need to stop for a few minutes and take a breather as I am so excited! Thank you Author for translating it for us 🫡, this is an amazing story and for us who loves to read Diaya fanfic, finding this kind of story is difficult! Go ahead and give this story a try. For those who are still hesitating this is the sign! The Author is very diligent with updates too! 🤩

The Story has been so good It's like draining your favorite juice leaves you wanting more. Can't wait for the next chapter. MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

love this book, I also love the reliable updates!

I've read all thousand chapters, and i can proudly say to you that this fanfic is an absolute banger. personally, i've never watch this anime before. first time experiencing it. but boy does that not stop me. somehow, it managed to trick me to read all the chapter. maybe it's just that good. I'm still in awe that this fanfic is a translation. so kudos to you translator san. p.s. I'd recommend listening neoni champion, while reading the tournament. it's just felt right.

Really good fanfic translation and the fanfic itself is also good, I recommend anyone who enjoyed to manga or anime to read this it’s very enjoyable and probably my 2nd favorite fanfic (currently on chapter 401)

I've read this up to 2000 chapters in MTL [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]