Gate of Aqyrus

Thank you to everyone who read this story! I hope everything is grammatically correct because I am 17 years old and I am not as good at English as native speakers, so there might be a few mistakes, but I hope there aren't. :) SPOILER! A few things about the story that you might have missed: -The number of chapters is 12, exactly the same as the number of letters in "Gate of Aqyrus," and the name S1N12 was chosen for this reason. -The first letter of each chapter forms "Gate of Aqyrus." -He is the one who brought technology to those called "gods." Unfortunately, the story has a sad ending, living in a paradox where he only suffers. But I hope you enjoyed reading this story. I was Mr_Alin and that was my story. YAHOO! :-)

Akira and Elena seemed to me a very good addition to the story considering the narrative and writing of the characters.

To begin with, the novel seems to be an interesting one. I love how some things are detailed so that they don't have to be questions. 5 stars for u:)

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i like it, is a good novel (bag pula-n priza de 220V sa ma tin la curent, idk why dar are oleaka de logica, ce e in paranteza e doar ca sa pot sa pun un coment :P)

Very interesting book.I started to read it and it is very good. I recomend to everyone that sees this to read the book because it's funny. This is for you Marinică.

It is perfect. Every detail is well gandit👍🏿! i love how the main character is fighting for his life constantly. I love this book and i recomend it to everyone!

Marinica regele 👑❤…………………………………………………………

A verry good first chapter, i can't wait to see more. because i need to write more to post a review here some romanian rap: printesa ta e in alt castel, probabil se caca am deschis cutia pandorei si a zis mai incearca dupa duel semnez cu scuipat nu cu sabia ca Zoro cand esti in afra cutiei, pai cine te-a pus acolo nu pot sa fiu atent ca probabil de ce e vecinu din mansarda si il cheama ADHD imi bag pula in capu meu ca nu traiesc asa ma intreb de ce nu cand vine vorba de e deceda is ca orice cu aganiu fratioare veniti mai multi va scutur pe toti mai tare si eu va zic dragilor ca nu ma opresc aici o sa fiu eu stranepotul povestind la strabunici fac mai rau ca 40 de hoti cu ali papa la telefon in rad in fata alo haha ma dau singur spre adoptie, deci cine ma vrea? e ok sa gusti din glorie dar nu te scufunda in ea.

The story looks interesting! Maybe along the way more characters will appear, not that I'm very good at remembering names. Because you are a beginner, I give you 5 stars!

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