Legacy of Harry Potter

Author here.. I have had some comments about short chapters and few comments even calling my writing trash.. as it appeared to them that I have forcefully placed monologue in chapter. I want to clarify: 1. Every chapter I post will be around 1k words. I am not a professional writer and I do it for fun and enjoyment. 2. I tend to let the story progress at a moderate pace. I don't fill up with monologues. If wanted this check the auxiliary chapter.. I could have literally used that much information to add atleast 3 chapters... used those knowledge to fulfill conversation.. I could have had a goblin recite all that information. 3. This is the style I will be following.

Nothing changes 74 chapters for nothing. In another story, he solved everything in almost 30 episodes. Why are you dragging it out so much? Harry Potter was too aggressive with the four children. Honestly, in the original story, I would put all the teachers in Azkaban because none of them are sane. Dumbledore is irritating in every way. Even more so here.

So far the story is very interesting and unique, quite a bit of the aspects in this are things I haven’t seen people do in a ho fic and they are compelling to read. Keep up the phenomenal work.🙏

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This is currently my favorite HP fanfiction I have found. so far it look like it's going to be very involved in the Wizarding world politics which I haven't seen done.

keep it up this story is getting good can't wait for the next upload

The setting is good, the back story of peveralls was short and sweet. Looking forward to the next part of the story

The story starts from a somewhat dubious but interesting premise, and develops in a very satisfying way, with Harry no longer being a guided and stupid character to taking on the real protagonist in the magical world, maintaining the necessary caution to survive and discover who They are his enemies and who he can trust.

Author here. Give the story a try and leave a review.

I think this story is quite good, but to really rate this story, it's actually to soon. I think it has good potential. now we just need to see how it goes

onc off the best fan fiction , i like the character, that's not bowling to people's opinions and needs. good job.

Awesome fanfic, keep writing!!!!

Prretty good not too shabby !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=recommend]

Pretty good book.