SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

It's a really good fanfic. I'm really hooked and can't wait for the next chapter.

ok, this novel is gold. BUT THE AUTHOR FORGOT 2 THINGS ABOUT DC, THE LORD OF ALL DC EVIL DARKSIDE an evil god that kill all Justice League members, AND STARFIRE THE HOTTEST ALIEN BABE IN DC..WHAT HELLo DUDE..GWEN LEFT THE DC UNIVERSE WITHOUT DEALING WITH DARKSIDE., ps author your novel gets 3 stars because you did not put Starfire in Gwen Heram that dumb.and WHY AVATAR KORRA

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Came back after a long time to see if anything changed and... no, The author still insists on making the Mc always right, changes or exaggerates the personalities of other characters to make them seem worse. Overall everything gives off an... immature vibe, The author is probably young so I get it but still more than 100 chapters and no improvement.

I enjoyed reading it but got bored at some point. the romantic relationships were very superficial and awkwardly realized. Mc got so many character templates that at some point I stopped reading which characters he got. I started skipping the chapters where he did a character lottery. Don't expect impressive action scenes and battles because Mc has gotten so powerful. In this kind of novels, the relationship between the characters and the way the events are managed keeps the novel flowing and makes it readable, but I must say that the novel is weak in this regard. Anyway, I still read it and enjoyed it. thank you author for your efforts I will give 3.5 stars.

Well, this is aight. The powers and the concept/system are interesting, but that’s about it. Everything related to romance (which is a big part of the novel) is so badly done, from dialogue to the way they interact, to the forced and unatural details and actions that push their relationships, you should stick to just one romantic interest, like in “Daughter of God” which is one of my fav novels on this site. There is also the issue that the mc feels like a man, more than in other yuri novels. The mc also does not act properly, given all the knowledge and info she has. This can be fixed by adding some monologues or plans that highlight her intelligence, or show the steps in creating tech, etc. The powerscalling of characters also feels confusing. Well, it’s still enjoyable but not anything special.

Very well written, especially for a power fantasy. Definitely worth reading, but I'm hesitant to give this a higher rating for a few reasons. The girlfriends that Gwen gets are largely inconsequential, to the point they might as well not even be there. The system is extremely clunky, and while there is eventually a story explanation for that, it sometimes makes it extremely difficult to read. Finally, the cognitive dissonance of Gwen one-shotting pretty much everything she fights, yet still complaining that she's bored and wants a challenge, all while being unwilling to enter a fight with anything on her level. Definitely one of the better fanfics on WN, despite those hangups, so worth the read.

Just wish it would be a top priority of the author

It is an exciting fanfic. Since the setting is the comics world of DC/Marvel Universe, all the characters/references mentioned are easily understood if you have ever read or watched Marvel/DC. Even if you haven't read/watch Marvel/DC, you get a good understanding of the powers granted to the MC. Or else you can do a Google Search and you immediately can picture the hero/villain with a wiki page of their powers. Nice. The system barely makes a showing here except to show stats and granted rewards. this isn't one of those "symbiotic" systems. it feels more like the AI of a game, or a good secretary/butler. Which is good since the focus is now literally on Gwen's development. However, the story seems to develop too fast. I feel she is really reeeeaaaallly OP. By the 15th chapter, she is basically immortal. Not an Undying, but an Immortal. I mean, she literally receives the knowledge and powers of superheroes/supervillains every few chapters, by the handful. One of them had the ability to survive without breathing, and a few had the ability for rapid regeneration/healing. She is developing too fast.

I loved this story and its main character. The plot is captivating and the character development is exceptional. I'm looking forward to more. I hope the author continues to publish!

pretty good I like the pacing of the story so far can't wait for the 5th chapter onward to see how it develops from here 😀

I was having fun reading this till the author decided to add cultivation which is admittedly a pet peeve. Honestly it's good enough that I'm just gonna put it on my on hold list for when I'm bored out of my mid with nothing good coming out. Overall worth a read.

My friend, I loved your fanfic so far, I loved everything, congratulations and the 3rd time that I'm rereading it since the last update of the new chapter, I honestly just hope that you abandon this raw pearl that you have in your hands, and I say again to goods for fic.

OK, THIS IS A GEM A UNIQUE GEM THAT NEEDS POLISH..PLOT STORY GWEN AVATAR THE LAST AIRBENDER OF DC BECAUSE ALL THE CHARACTERS' SOULS YOU KNOW ARE INSIDE HER BODY LIKE THE AVATAR