MHA Paragon

Amazing, It's really a good fanfiction please don't drop it.

Really like where this is going and looking forward to more chapters bro👍

I don’t have anything fancy to say but if you want a au mha story with more enemies than in the original story then you should give this fic a try. It’s pretty good so far.

Boss man made a really good fanfic, would definitely recommend also boss please release the bonus chapters thx. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It's soo good and really original novel.

I had thought it would be kinda like Shadow Slave based off of the description author gave and set up the world in chapter one, but he thoroughly ruined it in the same chapter. The world is amazing and would be so interesting to see, if only the author wasn’t a complete dumba$@ and made it uninteresting with a system that’s focused on smut, not to mention also being a harem. Like seriously, I know people do fanfics because it’s what they want but Jesus Christ why make something so interesting only to ruin it? It’s so sad to see a potential great ff go down the drain…

Hello once again, feeble humans! It is I, your favorite (and only) Hell's Prince! For the less... educated of you... I'll introduce myself, my name is Lucifer Morningstar. In my spare time I like to reincarnate mortals into worlds of fiction. You and whatever number of beings you have in your dwelling have been lucky enough to witness a masterpiece- I've conjured one HELL of a show for you and I don't care if you're ready for it. (Rewrite of the starting paragraph and I'm too lazy to do the rest

Really good fan fiction, love the idea for the story. Keep up the good work.

The story is great and has potential. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I like it the character is a versatile character I get carried away making them to strong or adding more powers

Rally good so far. Keep it up. Please don’t drop the book

Grammar and spelling are great, far above the average novel on WN, and the blend of worlds in this unique AU is intriguing. Characters are pretty good and act rationally within the plot. It's too early to comment much on the plot, although there are a lot of chapters, it's still very early due to the short chapters. The AU mix has given a nice twist on the standard MHA story progression, and I hope this continues. However, I don't find the story very satisfying. As mentioned, chapters are very short (<1000 words), combined with the slow pace, and lack of a consistent release schedule, results in a poor reading experience. I'm also not a fan of how the smut is written. The first instance had a full 5 chapters dedicated to foreplay with no conclusion. A later scene does end properly, but again, has 2.9 of 3 chapters dedicated to the build-up. It's all an anti-climax. It's technically well written, and has promise, but mainly due to the chapter length and inconsistent updates, I don't find it enjoyable. I'll probably stack up chapters and come back in a year, if it hasn't been dropped.

I was skeptical at first, but after reading it, I'm straight up high. I liked how the evolution of monsters changed the world and how it turned out. Also 18+ and the choice of girls. Toga is just a big plus. I also like the progression of events and how things are going, but the chapters could have been longer :)

this is gold, would be happy if the update is more frequent