Douluo Dalu(Soul Land): My System Is Dissatisfied
How can one survive in this world without a system now?!
Awaken the system at the beginning and receive the most bizarre disobedience system!
"The system detects that the host envies Tang San for having twin martial spirits. The system expresses disobedience and helps the host awaken three martial spirits!"
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"The system detects that the host envies Tang San for obtaining the external spirit bone, Eight Spider Lance. The system expresses disobedience and grants the host the external spirit bone, Dragon Phoenix Ancient Wings!"
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"The system detects that the host is being abused by Zhao Wuji. The system expresses disobedience and gives the Spirit Douluo Experience Card."
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Besides envy and disobedience, is there anything else the system can do?
Of course!
"The system detects that the host prevented Tang San from absorbing the spirit ring of the human-faced demon spider, subverting the original storyline and rewarding 800 attribute points."
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CTTO:
斗罗之我的系统又不服气了
Author: Jiu_Hao_Zhang_Ju
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This dude can't even spell dissatisfied, and he wants me to read his book. At least make the grammar in your title correct. 🤡🤡
I'm starting this and I really hope this story is not just wish fulfillment with a mc who only thinks with his dick (I'm a harem supporter but even I have limits that this sight has crossed many times) hopefully the guy has a better moral compass
There is a limit to stereotypes, Su Yuntiao isn't THAT blind. Heck he isn't blind, he is stating fact in the manhua and novel while also being totally right yet not having the critically missing information of the clear sky hammer being in Tang San left hand. But here you are making this out of proportion. You even stated that he knew that the mc was beyond lvl 20, meaning so long as he get spirit ring he us directly on par with him yet you make him dismiss him. You even wrote a pear martial spirit, isn't that a food type???? If a food type, notorious for theirs slow cultivation, start at 20+ isn't that a genius??? How is that worthless. You force a point so dumb I can't expect anything from you anymore. Another brainless fanfiction with no reflection.
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my brain died in the 5th chapter, The translation was good but the story..... story was horrible with plot holes like swiss cheese (Nothing makes sense in the characters thought process)
This fanfic is pure gold! The MC’s interactions with the system are hilarious and unique. The sass and unpredictability make every chapter a blast
Weak, hesitant and weak, these are the characteristics of the character here. Despite his strength, he remains a damned prostitute who tolerates people stealing his things and a child molester, despite being over 25 years old. I don’t know why the idiots here gave him a high rating, even if it was a translation. The translator should be cursed because he translated this garbage.
it was all fun... dropped at chapter 75, at this point he's running a charity gift fund because why not
Wow!! A few years ago I read this book on MTL, I really liked it and it has about a thousand chapters. Unfortunately, I stopped reading it because it was unbearable! Very difficult to read, I could no longer distinguish who was who, the powers, what was happening in the plot and so on... I hope the translator puts some effort into the translation, because it is a very funny story and an enjoyable read.
Where's the segsss author...............
Raahhhhh ..............................
ive read a lot of douluo dalu ff byt this hits different man please continue this
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