Ten Times Investment Rebate System
John, a 19-year-old orphan, grapples with life's harsh realities after being abandoned by his uncle. Despite his efforts, John is deemed talentless by the Francisco's family and is brutally cast out; left with nothing but memories of his stolen inheritance from his father and the pain of rejection. John contemplates ending his suffering but ultimately resolves to survive by wandering the unforgiving streets of Golden City.
Living hand-to-mouth, John clings to the little cash he had managed to save before his parents' untimely demise. With grit and relentless determination, he becomes a street vendor, working day and night. It's now two years and John has amassed $5,000, gaining local fame as "Jonte," the resilient vendor whose story continues to inspire many.
Fearing the resentment of the Francisco's family in the city, John decision to relocate and move to Greenland City in the eastern was no doubt. Thereafter, capitalizing $4000 on his first investment, who knew that John would receive a prompt with a congratulatory message that echoed in his mind with an irritating mechanical voice!
[Congratulations for activating Ten Times Investment Rebate System.]
Stunned, John listened as the voice continued...
[The Host is entitled to exuberant rewards on any investment made.]
Before John could fully grasp what was going on, another messages echoed in his mind severally one after the other.
[Congratulations! The Host has received $40,000 Ten Times Investment Rebate applied. The Host can confirm in his personal account.]
Immediately, his almost worn out Samsung phone wrang indicating a new message.{ Confirmed. You have received $40,000 from TTIRS.}
John opened his mouth agape and his face shown with a hot smile. He quietly returned his phone in the pocket and lowered his head as new messages continued to echo in his mind.
[Congratulations! The Host has earned a Honda motorcycle as a reward.]
[ The Host rewarding rates will come in this order: Upon making an investment worth $4000
$20,000
$50,000
$100,0000 and above]
[Congratulations! The Host will be equipped with driving skills upon any successful achievement.]
John's life transforms in an instant, his mind swirling with possibilities and the promise of unimaginable wealth.
Would John one day downfall the wealth record history of the Fransisco's family? Find the truth behind his parents demise? Fight for his position in the family for his inheritance before the court of law or focus on his life realities?
Let us all join John our hero who is determined to showcase his life realities.
The book is really nice I like how the events follow each other .it's really interesting good work to the author,you are doing well.waiting to see how the book will progress
There's not much for me to, just some concern about the MC's system. When I think about it, there's no need for the MC to work hard, he can just invest and invest then he'll get 10x rebate. That's why I'm hoping for the author to give a proper limitation its benefits. Moreover, in perspective, not all people are that easygoing. That they would help someone just by knowing their name or something, but I might be wrong. Maybe there's some hidden agenda or whatnot. Anyway, it's a good read.
The story setting and characters are interesting and new. The authors writing style is really refreshing. Really enjoying joying the story.Keep it up.
Very refreshing, gives appreciation to story pacing and steady progress. A wonderful work by the author, great job!
Story is fairly interesting, and has a lot of potential. I am excited to see where the author takes the story. While the story has a number of good points such as having an interesting concept, strong system and a fairly smart non beta MC, it also has several problems that I’d hope to see improve as the story continues. I don’t believe the author is a native English speaker though i coudl be wrong, so there are a number of wrongly used words, places with poor grammar, misspelled words and general dissonance in the story, though they have little impact on the story itself and don’t affect the reading experience that much. There are also a number of strange choices, background information and world building decisions that negatively impact the flow and immersion of the story but they aren’t too numerous or aggregious and I think that as the author continues they should improve in this aspect. Overall it’s a promising novel and I’m looking forward to seeing what happens