Cold Blooded Miss Ai; Please Notice Me

Cold Blooded Miss Ai; Please Notice Me

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Author: Novel_Luck
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Growwing up fatherless as a kid, Ai Meng's life had been one hell of problem. Her mother ensured that Ai Meng knows she was never wanted and made every second of living, hell for her. That was until she was nine and Ai Meng was given by her mother to her grandmother who took care of her until she was seventeen. She found her brothers, father and Fang Haoyu a rich second generation heir whom she thought brought nothing but trouble. What happens when Ai Meng's insecurities starts opening up when she got people who loved her for who she is? What happens whe she keeps telling herself she's a mistake, never wanted. What happens when she tries killing herself and making her family grief on her behalf, What happens when life doesn't go as planned. It kept throwing her back to Fang Haoyu no matter how badly she wanted to run away.

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Undeadphoenix
Undeadphoenix

intresting i will add this to may library .

8 months ago
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Efebrudu_Caroline_5644
Efebrudu_Caroline_5644

seems worth reading will be adding to my library

7 months ago
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Renante_Andagan
Renante_Andagan

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7 months ago
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honey_hall_perabo
honey_hall_perabo

All the best All the best All the best

7 months ago
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Su_Yu_5505
Su_Yu_5505

the story is good ... keep it up guys hehehe

7 months ago
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sennun
sennun

Truly awfully bad only acceptable for idiots who mindlessly consume content

7 months ago
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DaoistWLGMYr
DaoistWLGMYr

it is a good book to spend your time. good story

7 months ago
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DaoistWdlVKa
DaoistWdlVKa

Reveal Spoiler

7 months ago
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Mea_Nollitsac
Mea_Nollitsac

nice and and collaboration of the novel characters

7 months ago
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sneax23
sneax23

Reveal Spoiler

7 months ago
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Artny_Amara
Artny_Amara

I'd hoped you'd use speech marks for ease identification of direct speech

7 months ago
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Maria_Andersson_8078
Maria_Andersson_8078

Sorry, could not read past the first few paragraphs. I started against better judgment seeing that every word in the synopsis started with a capital letter. That was not the case in the first chapter luckily, but upper and lower case are not used according to standard English. The formatting generally should be revised. The punctuation separates connected elements into different sentences. Dialogue is written inside the running text without markers when it starts or stops. Etc. I realise this might be due to translation from a language where punctuation and other formatting rules are different. But it takes a lot of energy to figure out the text when it doesn't follow common writing rules at all, and the risk that the reader abandons it instead is big, which is a pity as the story itself might be good (I marked the other categories as "3" as I could not judge them.)

7 months ago
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Speed_7255
Speed_7255

I think the story is somewhat very not bad and

7 months ago
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Lies_of_Requiem
Lies_of_Requiem

Just reviewing for fast pass event.

7 months ago
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Danetrix_05
Danetrix_05

siiiuuuuuuuu diría el bicho.............

7 months ago
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