Doing Freelance Work Across the Universe
This universe is the creation of the divine being Revel, for when he came into it he knew joy in his existence and revelled in it. It is filled with millions of worlds and life forms, all of whom do know not their maker's name...
Fólórunsó and Sola are mercenaries of the United Freelancer Organisation stationed on the planet Pedtro doing odd jobs to make do every day. Fólórunsó is bound to a strange contract tied to a stranger power he can never truly master. Sola is tied to the day the skies fell to earth and is plagued by an ailment that will inevitably take his life. These two misfit allies find themselves taking up a peculiar job for an exuberant payment that ends up separating their paths. What will happen to the two as they explore this universe and its infinite worlds, and what will occur in their inevitable reunion?
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I thoroughly enjoyed this, I hope you release more soon. The world building is very fascinating. The characters have depth, even if I've only read five chapters.
Besides a lot of grammar and spelling errors (which I hope will be addressed eventually) and a really fast pacing, this is a really good story. I enjoy how the power system lets Folorunsho develop himself through technique over overwhelming strength and the dual protagonist approach which each one getting a focus in a volume of their own so far, is pretty good. We pray for the return of DFLAU
This is a really captivating volume, and with more work it could really stand out. I feel the pacing should be adjusted, some scenes feel rushed, and also adjust the clarity for more flow.
Ok, the story is well-thought and interesting. I have just got some few questions here and there but all In it's a really gripping story. For some reason I can't leave the comment until I've written 140 words. By the way I am not even done with the book yet
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