BNHA: Spiritual Aura

Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one

I see a lot of non-relevant and erroneous information released in the story that takes away the desire to read a little, like lengthening something like the prologue too much.

The prologue was trash and had too much info-dumping. Not to mention, this is a slow-paced novel—40 chapters in and it hasn't even reached UA yet? The pre-harem setup felt way too forced. If it were just one or two people, I could agree, but Nejire and Yaomomo? In canon, they didn't even know each other in childhood. Also, what's with every woman here being a shotacon?

Prologue is unnecessarily brutal and sad, but even 48 chapters in MC is still a small child with abilities that would already allow him to rule even the USA but he's still developing more Nen and Chakra and Haki next he'll unlock a Stand or Hamon from Jojo. There's been no development in the story yet and any kind of plot has yet to reveal itself.

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Trop d'info et bla bla inutiles faut raccourcir surtout que c le début de l'histoire alors c le moment pour gagner des lecteurs [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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It is for ruined my day with the prologue ................................................................................................................

It is less than 10 chaps review, but it is good so far; the prologue seems long, but it is easy to read and has potential. will there be lemons?

So far, so good it's kind of a sad start. Having a prologue was better than I died and what not. It was a nice change of pace. The characters introduced so far are good they have plenty of personality and emotions. I'm looking forward to where it goes from here. I skimmed around the first half prologue part 2 TMI for me, but don't let that deter you it's still a good read. That's the one thing I didn't like and figured I'd give you a heads up just in case. Once again a good read with a lot of possibilities.

This story is so far really entertaining to read. While it is a slow burn for now, it's a nice mix of slice of life and info/training. Can't wait to see how the story progresses through UA.

I find it interesting that you introduce nen beasts or spiritual concepts into the world of MHA and how those energies affect those around the protagonist. As for the slow development, I don't mind. There are people who complain about that, but they forget that all the plots of Boku no Hero happen in the protagonist's first year as students. Personally, I don't care as long as it's well written and understood. As for the harem, it doesn't bother me. After all, I'm a veteran of DXD stories, where they exaggerate the harem. Take that gentleman, his 5 stars.

love the story don't care about the haters!!!

MC is an unlikable arrogant prick that hates the idea of being a hero. The FF started really well, but it slowly started to get worse and worse, really falling when the MC tells the police chief to his face that he will kill his enemies in the future. The MC just gets progressively worse until he starts knocking people out in school and acting like an asshole to everyone. Some people will say “he had a difficult 2 lives” and some bullshit, but no matter how difficult your life was doesn’t mean you get to act like an asshole. No excuse you could make would make me like this MC, and the way the girls just ignore how bad his personality is towards other people is stupid, especially Momo who sees how he treats his classmates and even heroes.