I tried but your grammar is just way too awful I could barely understand anything in those very very short chapters ik you want to release a bunch of chapters but this isn't the way to go about it bro
3 months ago
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DaoistUc8uwg
It’s an interesting concept but the chapters are way to short, about an average of 50 words per chapter and I feel there could be more
3 months ago
1
Swastherm_Mathew
Good at writing, very regularly updates, fine at characters and world setting, good plots, but the story is too short.
I tried but your grammar is just way too awful I could barely understand anything in those very very short chapters ik you want to release a bunch of chapters but this isn't the way to go about it bro
It’s an interesting concept but the chapters are way to short, about an average of 50 words per chapter and I feel there could be more
Good at writing, very regularly updates, fine at characters and world setting, good plots, but the story is too short.