Hey guys, I'm here with a new story, or technically this isn't a new story, as this is a re-write of High School DxD: The Runaway Gremory!
This story will be split into chapters , like the actual DxD light novel . We got that? Good. The starting chapters will be the main character (Kenji Gremory) and his life with his family before he (clue's in the title) runs away (OMGMEGASPOILERZAMIRITEM8).
Anything in this fanfiction that you recognise doesn't belong to me.
"Normal Speech"
'Thoughts'
This novel is pretty shit so far. This is literally the worst MC I've ever seen, he's such a overdramatic little shit. What was the author thinking when he wrote this character. Even if he improves and gets character development, there was no need to make him THAT bad.
The stupidest main character I have seen until now, is just an idiot who does not want to take any responsibility at all, he even thinks about suicide so as not to get married, In the end the main character is just a clown.🤡🤡🤡
The story started well, but then when GG developed, everything went wrong somehow, he inherited so much power, but at the age of 16 he was only able to do what to do and bite the hand of a bastard. MAKE THE MAIN CHARACTER AND NOW THE DESIRE TO READ DISAPPEARS BECAUSE OF HOW WEAK THE MAIN CHARACTER IS. I am writing through a translator, so there may be some mistakes, this is my subjective opinion.
The worst main character I’ve seen till now, Jesus Christ.
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it's an interestingly story that's for sure but I do hope to see the mc acting his age instead of acting out but keep up the good work
Overall, mc is nothing more than a whining, baby bitch. Even worse than rias original character.
goooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddr
thanky yoiu love the original but the Grammer I as way to bad to Read it