Naruto: With Favorabiltity System

Nothing special about this fanfic. It's like one of the many that you can find in Fanfic.net. The MC is the same old unbothered transmigrator who's too cool for school. Plays 'safe' and hides his powers for no reason whatsoever. The lack of creativity in Naruto fanfics is so aggravating- either they're overconfident Chinese young master stories or something like this.

good translation but the mc is too Chinese and hides his power for no reason

This is a translation of a Chinese fic. of course you know if you at least read the Synopsis. Thanks for reading. Hope you like the fic and I did decent enough job to translate and not change the style.

I will translate it with Google hehe::: 5/2/2/4/3 For the translator nothing to criticize, Few grammatical errors, but my problem is with the story there are many errors with the dates, the personalities of the characters, things that Kakashi does with the flying thunder, Rin possibly falls in love with Obito, mc pretends to be weak when he already shows that he is strong. That is what I got to see as far as I read it (I probably dropped it). Things I like: mc and Obito's friendship, the system, the comedy is not the best but it is there. and some things that I forgot.

Pretty good story, the protagonist is likeable, the system is cool, his actions are well thought out and interesting. Plenty of likeable characters in Kakashi’s time, I really have very few minor complaints, it’s been a fun read. Sometimes the translations aren’t completely polished for stuff like technique names, character names etc, but they’re pretty minor and easily understood with some context and Danzo is pretty outrageous but that’s nothing new. Overall, I’d give it a try.

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The writing is really good I will be dropping due to the deaths of sukumo and many others including shisui

Just read until chapter 39 and that chapter seals it. It’s awful just plain stupid. If any one wants to know just read a few chapter before up to that chapter and you will understand the quality of this is poor even among Chinese fanfic. A serious waste. It had potential but it’s complete garbage at that point.

Well, what is raw? .x.x. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . . . . . . . .

I like everything about this fanfiction the mc is kind and still cold when needed the character relationship with the mc is also unique. The system is also good and stable

Очень интересно читать хорошо что без рамантики [img=Feeling it] буду ждать продолжения надеюсь что автор не забросить эту работу гг крутой система тоже

This Story is better than other fanfics that mainly focus on harem and all, but a little bit of romance would give a touch to this story

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