Ice-Ice Fruit in Marvel

Premise is good, but what do you expect from a Chinese novel? racism against black people and them thinking they're superior (the chinese) needs to be proofread and deleted the overly exaggerated parts.

Overall a normal fic, but as in all Chinese works there are things like: racism, nationalism, propaganda and strange manner of speech and narration

Overall, I would say this is a fairly good translation. However, the issue of racism from the original work remains. For instance, there's phrasing like: 'He is disliked due to his Chinese descent and because his parents were murdered by a Black man.' This detail is unnecessary and confusing, as it doesn’t make sense how the ethnicity of one's parents' murderer would affect someone's popularity.

author please if you are translating this Chinese novel at least try to make it good and avoid all the nationalism and racist shit they put in it (( I am not even angry at u but this just ruined my day ))

Not great, not terrible... The biggest downside of this novel is, once again, the relationship development is non-existent, and MC just collects women with few lines of speech... that's a really big no-no; it makes the entire thing rather unreal. The novel doesn't really have much depth, shame, cause the premise was good. Some will have problems with racism and nationalism, but for me, that's just how things are in the Chinese novels these days, especially fanfics like Marvel or DC; there is no point of complaining about that and be angry about that. Once you read through many novels like that, you will be able to automatically ignore all of those things on your own. Otherwise, it's just your average Chinese fanfic... if you just want to kill some time, then it will probably serve the purpose.

I've read till chapter 39 before I couldn't take it anymore. The plot holes in this fanfic are too big to ignore, many times mid chapter the direction suddenly change without any warning nor context. This is more noticeable between one chapter to another, chapter X can end about a certain subject and then chapter Y begins on another subject altogether as if a few paragraphs were missing from the new chapter. The system of the MC also changes all the time with his points always decreasing and increasing without any pattern, though I'm not really surprised since this is a Chinese fanfic after all and they're notoriously known to be bad at keeping track of system points... The translation also was done somewhat okay but with plenty of mistakes here and there.

Good story so far.What is the Chinese novel name? Anyone know.

Only managed to get to beginning of chapter 4. Straight Chinese mtl rip. No editing whatsoever. Names are wrong. Idiot MC talks to his system out loud while in a conversation with other people. So stupid.

The chapters are out of order, but it is an interesting concept for a story. I would only recommend it if your willing to ignore the chapters are out of order and are willing to read another Chinese translated fanfiction.

I found the storyline of this story quite entertaining. I don't think the author is exaggerating the facts at all. While white people are trying to solve the problem of black people being discriminated against, black people discriminate against and attack Asian people, which we see almost every day. It's not strange that the author uses real stories in the story.

It's another shitty novel where the protagonist hides his power, webnovel is riddled with this cliché. Ndkdkdkdnfjfucucjcjvkvjckfkdkfkfkkfkfkfkfi ufdjndjfufdkfjugjffjifufndndnfixisnebf

A poorly written story done in a Chinese style for the MC and the system, which can be hit or miss. This one is an extremem miss on top of being all over the place with very little reasoning behind actions on paper, random high levels of racism that doesn't happen in real life in public even close to what's shown let alone comics, a haremish feeling/use of women that's disgusting, and inconsistencies on tracking the points and usage of the system.

Very funny, sad that Chinese novels don't have lemon scenes, anyway could the author say the original name of the work in Chinese please?........................

Started okay-ish but then nosedived into the earth. Save ur braincells