HP: I Become Dudley With The Power Of Hogwarts Legacy

its a good start, with mc being inserted as dudley at end of year 4. now we have someone who thinks outside the box because he has knowledge about future and has hogwarts legacy magic. But author has posted this before and i have already read the amount which is poste till now (15) so im waiting for more. give it a try.

This story is very confusing, the events have no connection, it is difficult to follow because conversations begin in the middle of the subject without knowing how the conversation began or ended

its ancient magic i did not read it yet i will start reading it after it become 20 chap but its good idea but if u did not played the game u would miss up everything i see there a gamer tag thats mean there would be the talent system and achievements system i wish u would not miss this up my brother and good luck

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It was too abrupt a change, the narrative makes no sense. His personality changes so much from one minute to the next, that's weird. I wish I had a time-turner so I could go back and not have read this.

This story is barely skirting my bottom line. There’s no character growth and the author doesn’t understand cause and effect. Stuff happens when the plot demands with almost no build up, characters are written to follow along with whatever happens and the author flip flops between writing like the leader doesn’t know a thing about Harry Potter or knows the entire plot. An example of this is when the author explains what the statue of secrecy and the concept of an obscurial, but completely skips over the death of Sirius Black by just writing, “And then Harry told what happened to Sirius.” The plots all over the place, the characters are as bland as cardboard and even the premise of the MCs insertian to the world by having an AI pilot their body for years is cheap and clearly just a way to get to the “exciting” parts faster. Don’t read this it’s a confusing waste of time that has no substance.

5 star intil I am dissatisfied with your fanfic

Hello, I'm not actually writing for this story. I'm writing because I'm curious when you will update your Harry Potter: Transmigrated As Voldemort's Father story. The summary intrigued me a lot. Are you planning to upload a new chapter?

The story has been stagnant, after so many chapters the story is still stuck at year 5! Choose a perspective and stick too it.

I’m not going to lie for some parts of this story you have to turn your brain off.

just please don't have it romance and harem. All is well with everything.

A well written story that is overall an enjoyable read It has a well explained plot,and a decent upload consistency overall five stars.

This is one of the best dudley hp novel that i read online. Keep up the good work. I hope that they will image dumbeldore in a worse light, since he plotted for harries parents and allies to die. Afterwards he took guardianship of harry potter, plundering his families assets, wealth and relics. He even left harry potter out by not informating of the potter alliances that has been made with blood pacts.