everything was not bad until the woman and the child appeared. Why did he save them? Okay, he would have made an agreement and then stabbed me in the back, but no, he kept them if they disappear later, then I will put 5 stars
8 months ago
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TheHighElite
Everything about this novel just feels
rushed? characters feel soul-less and so far not much of anything! has been explained or even developed right it feels just dead and mind numbing to read
tho I'm also at the very start of this novel so I'll change my review if it gets better however I highly recommend the author revises or edits the first few chapters at least because so far it has not been easy for me to enjoy or even get into at all
to read this
feels like doing math homework In my personal opinion
the premise while similar to alot of other novels is still semi unique in its own way so there's potential here author
tldr do better Author and add a soul to this!!
everything was not bad until the woman and the child appeared. Why did he save them? Okay, he would have made an agreement and then stabbed me in the back, but no, he kept them if they disappear later, then I will put 5 stars
Everything about this novel just feels rushed? characters feel soul-less and so far not much of anything! has been explained or even developed right it feels just dead and mind numbing to read tho I'm also at the very start of this novel so I'll change my review if it gets better however I highly recommend the author revises or edits the first few chapters at least because so far it has not been easy for me to enjoy or even get into at all to read this feels like doing math homework In my personal opinion the premise while similar to alot of other novels is still semi unique in its own way so there's potential here author tldr do better Author and add a soul to this!!