The High School Experiment is a psychological thriller that follows Nakamura Eiya as he navigates life at Tokyo Metropolitan Elysian High School, a prestigious academy built on more than it lets on.
Bound by the school’s cursed Reputation System, Nakamura encounters enigmatic figures, hidden agendas, and a world where intelligence is the ultimate weapon. But beneath his seemingly average demeanor, there’s something… off. Is Nakamura truly ordinary, or is he hiding something?
What is Project Perfection?
What is this school’s true purpose?
And most importantly—who really is Nakamura Eiya?
The answers lie ahead. Watch as he survives.
so like me, you also write using the first pov narrative... but this style is only meant for story with a nuance of comedy or to be exact, the English words should be casual and entertaining because the one that is speaking is the characters, not the author. Too much description is also a no no to this style.. why? because if you tell a story yourself, you won't yap about everything you saw right? However the content is interesting,, keep it up!!