I hope readers stick with this fanfic until chapter 26 because the story improves significantly by then, and I’m sure they’ll enjoy what’s to come after that point.
6 months ago
31
moolchoco
Let’s go! I love this setup for the fanfic. The story looks really promising so far, and I’m super excited to see how the rest unfolds!
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6 months ago
13
dammno
Simply amazing. At first I will admit I didn’t really like it much just. However it slowly began to blossom into a beautifully crafted fanfic. There were many laughs to be had and even almost a tear or two shed. I recommend for those who are feeling reluctant to read to keep doing so and I hope you will enjoy this work as much as I have.
6 months ago
9
Sphnqs
I'm at chapter 22 and there is no mention of venom/parasite when does it show up
5 months ago
22
Doom_Night
Absolutely brilliant. One of the best Naruto novels I’ve ever read. Mc is extremely likeable.
His relationship with others is amazing and doesn’t feel fake in any way. Especially his relationship with sasuke, they’re basically brothers.
Author isn’t afraid to diverge from plot, and did several things that honestly surprised me. Mcs background is interesting as well. Overall, an amazing novel.
6 months ago
18
Moonhorse
The premise of the story is great! It’s a bit lacking in pace for my taste, but that doesn’t make it a bad story. It’s actually one of the best out there ... just needs more chapters, lol!
6 months ago
10
Cussy_jackson
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5 months ago
6
loveran
The fanfic is amazing, and I really love how the author isn't afraid to break from canon and make significant changes. The pacing is also handled exceptionally well.
6 months ago
6
lon155
This is one of my favorite fanfics! It’s really good and has a completely different vibe from what I’ve been reading this past year. It’s refreshing for my mood, and the comedy is absolute gold.
6 months ago
5
Royal0
Great start to the story! I’m really enjoying it so far, and I hope you keep going with it. Please don’t drop it this time,it’s too good to stop!
6 months ago
5
reza_Asgari
One of the best fanfic you van find
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6 months ago
3
lackNom
well first of all writing quality is perfect stability of update is also good but chapters are a little short (well you feel they are short bc they are good) story development and character design are both awesome
when author said in review that it gets better from chap 26 I didn't believe him but now that I'm past that aww hell yeahh bro got some serious creativity and I'm loving it
2 months ago
2
paja
well its a nice story, really nice.
at 50 chapters its getting tiring from repeating forgiving for everything and understanding everyone. thats not how emotionally unstable prople takes, mc lives in a tragedy but his charactes is wtitten from objective and obserwatory point whats make it not realistic. second, he knows a plot and he does nothing to change it, everything that he tries to change just backfire on him, becose he is not planing at all. he have a goal yeah but no idea what to do do make it right.
its enjoyable read still, and I hope it continues.
I hope readers stick with this fanfic until chapter 26 because the story improves significantly by then, and I’m sure they’ll enjoy what’s to come after that point.
Let’s go! I love this setup for the fanfic. The story looks really promising so far, and I’m super excited to see how the rest unfolds! .
Simply amazing. At first I will admit I didn’t really like it much just. However it slowly began to blossom into a beautifully crafted fanfic. There were many laughs to be had and even almost a tear or two shed. I recommend for those who are feeling reluctant to read to keep doing so and I hope you will enjoy this work as much as I have.
I'm at chapter 22 and there is no mention of venom/parasite when does it show up
Absolutely brilliant. One of the best Naruto novels I’ve ever read. Mc is extremely likeable. His relationship with others is amazing and doesn’t feel fake in any way. Especially his relationship with sasuke, they’re basically brothers. Author isn’t afraid to diverge from plot, and did several things that honestly surprised me. Mcs background is interesting as well. Overall, an amazing novel.
The premise of the story is great! It’s a bit lacking in pace for my taste, but that doesn’t make it a bad story. It’s actually one of the best out there ... just needs more chapters, lol!
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The fanfic is amazing, and I really love how the author isn't afraid to break from canon and make significant changes. The pacing is also handled exceptionally well.
This is one of my favorite fanfics! It’s really good and has a completely different vibe from what I’ve been reading this past year. It’s refreshing for my mood, and the comedy is absolute gold.
Great start to the story! I’m really enjoying it so far, and I hope you keep going with it. Please don’t drop it this time,it’s too good to stop!
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well first of all writing quality is perfect stability of update is also good but chapters are a little short (well you feel they are short bc they are good) story development and character design are both awesome
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when author said in review that it gets better from chap 26 I didn't believe him but now that I'm past that aww hell yeahh bro got some serious creativity and I'm loving it
well its a nice story, really nice. at 50 chapters its getting tiring from repeating forgiving for everything and understanding everyone. thats not how emotionally unstable prople takes, mc lives in a tragedy but his charactes is wtitten from objective and obserwatory point whats make it not realistic. second, he knows a plot and he does nothing to change it, everything that he tries to change just backfire on him, becose he is not planing at all. he have a goal yeah but no idea what to do do make it right. its enjoyable read still, and I hope it continues.