Supreme Eyes: Being Adopted by a princess
Born blind and causing his mother’s death in the process, Adam did not have an easy childhood.
Due to the circumstances of his birth, he was labeled a cursed child, enduring a harsh upbringing as he suffered mistreatment at the hands of his own family.
Everything changed when, at the age of five, he was subjected to a talent test alongside other children. However, he failed spectacularly, becoming one of the rare cases in history of someone born without talent.
His family immediately exiled him, abandoning him to his fate in a forest teeming with spiritual beasts.
But by a twist of fate, a higher existence took notice of him—Selene Ashwyn, the princess of an immortal empire, who wandered in search of something that could help her escape her own destiny.
Sensing something special within him, Selene chose to take him in as her disciple, determined to help him escape the deep darkness that had engulfed him since birth.
Follow Adam’s journey and his inevitable rise to the top.
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This is my first novel, so I appreciate any comments and/or constructive criticism.
Objectives for readers:
100 Power Stones ---> 1 extra chapters
25 golden tickets ---> 1 extra chapter
Updated cover (Selene)
As is usual on this platform, I’ll leave my review as the author to address doubts and answer your questions. 1. I want to make it clear that there will be no NTR, Yuri, R#pe, or anything similar. 2. The harem will not be a Pokédex. Relationships will develop naturally, and all the female protagonists will remain important throughout the entire story (generic harems suck). 3. On that note, the harem won’t be enormous, as it would be impossible to give all the female protagonists significant roles if that were the case. 4. There will be R-18 content, but much later in the story. 5. English is my second language, so if you spot any errors, I’d appreciate it if you pointed them out. Feel free to ask anything; I’m here reading your comments.
This is my first review, so I’m not sure how well I’ll do. The best aspects of the story are its plot and grammar. I find it very original, although it starts off a bit slow since there isn’t much action in the first few chapters. However, that doesn’t bother me too much because, in return, we get to see the introduction of characters and the development of the MC. As for world-building, it doesn’t introduce too much, at least at the beginning, but it gives us small glimpses to help us get oriented, which is a plus for me. I don’t like info dumps. I recommend reading the first 20 chapters before forming a conclusion about the novel. Thank you very much, author! Keep it up.