Dungeon lord: Invading the DiVine world
Silvan Owsris was humanity's last hope in the war against the monstrous otherworld race, Kymers.
He had even pushed beyond his limit, but it was all futile in front of them. He could not even save his dying world.
He could only think that death should have been his release. Instead, it was just the beginning.
He woke up in a brand new life, where he and the others were dragged into the Divine World.
By the same entity, Who will be using them! The Dungeon lords to Invade the Devine world
Here, the system governed all. Whether it was quests, penalties, or even rewards.
Choose your body parts. Select genetic codes. Assign soul slots.
But this time, Silvan wasn't just another pawn. Armed with his past memories and the power to twist the system’s rules, he would rise again.
This time, it was not just about survival but revenge for his loved ones.
In a world of monsters and cultivators, Silvan will carve his own path. It will be the one with destruction, defiance, and retribution.
The system master will soon learn that not all heroes he killed stayed dead and his own tool "System" will be the ban of his existence.
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Chapter 1 is a captivating start. You've crafted a compelling, tragic backstory for Silvan, immediately immersing the reader in his world of loss and the promise of revenge. The initial scene of his final battle against the Kymer Titan is vivid and emotionally charged, setting the stage for a high-stakes, action-packed narrative. The introduction of the system and the concept of "Dungeon Lords" is intriguing, raising questions about the nature of this new world and the potential for power struggles. The sudden eruption of chaos at the end of the chapter effectively raises the stakes and leaves the reader eager to discover the next chapter. Your ability to blend action, emotion, and intrigue is impressive, and I'm excited to see how Silvan's journey unfolds.
the World building is good and the character is also likable. by the way interesting system choice hope you keep updating it,
I like the book so far(read up to ch 11), especially it's pacing, writing quality and how the story develops. I think the main character, Silivan I somewhat interesting, he is well designed and so us the system. The leveling up and cultivation vibes it gives is a fresh take on things. only problem for me here, is the descriptions that can sometimes seem confusing. other than that, incredible work.
I absolutely love the world-building, the depth of the characters, the perfect pacing, and the engaging dialogue—it all weaves together into an unforgettable experience!
Good character and world-building; Slivan is likeable and he knows his shit. The only problem was that he believed he could take the Titan. He couldn't. Now, after 3 years, he was offered the chance to redeem himself and maybe save his friends.
I just finished reading Dungeon Lord: Invading the Divine World, and it’s really nice. If you’re into dungeon-building, action, and a powerful MC, you should definitely check it out!
This story is off to an amazing start! The opening battle scene is intense and gripping, and I love the way you introduce Silvan and his world. The transition to a world without magic is really interesting, and I'm curious to see how Silvan adapts to his new life. The sudden appearance of Zalther and the mass teleportation add a ton of mystery and suspense, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Silvan's determination to find his comrades and get revenge is super exciting. I'm already hooked on this story!
The story is intriguing, and I love how it’s unfolding. I can’t fully decide yet, but I’m definitely excited to keep reading. The author does a great job of maintaining suspense and making the experience enjoyable. Can’t wait to see where it all leads!
So far it's interesting 🤔 can't decide yet but I'm excited for more 😊 great work author.