RWBY: Moon Reflection

To be honest I don’t really know much about RWBY. The only reason I picked up this was Kokushibo. This fic is a solid 7/10. Solid world building, Decent pace, Good character interaction. Only problems I feel are that Kokushibo isn’t really portrayed correctly. Reading about him Laughing, Joking, and doing other similar extroverted things is odd to me since Kokushibo has been consistently shutting off his emotions for 600+ years, becoming a cold hearted killing machine. It’s only after his defeat does he show anything beyond what was listed earlier. His social interactions should be a struggle imo since, he hasn’t interacted in a friendly manor in literal centuries with human, him becoming adept at this is unrealistic portrayal.

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PEAK, PURE CINEMA. I love this fic and what author did on Kokushibo. This fic got better and better as the time goes on, just let it cook and read, and as the chapters go you'll realize how peak it is.

Haven't read this yet. The description of novel tells me nothing at all. Why would I waste time trying to figure out what this novel is about? That's what the description is for. Please author make an actual description of novels from here on out, maybe you will get more readers.

This story is great. I'm enjoying how the characters are written and can't wait to read more.....................................................................

One of the best Rwby novels I ever read thank you so much 😊 …………………………………….. …………………………………….. …………………………………….. …………………………………….. …………………………………….. …………………………………….. ……………………………………..

I like it, haven't watched/ read demon slayer so can't comment about that to much but like the pace and MC. Looking forward to how it progresses, also really hopes Ozpin gets it. Keep it up.

I have no words. Out of the myriad of fanfics I’ve read, this reigns as one of the best stories I’ve ever laid eyes on. It was sent to me in a Discord by someone claiming it to be insanely good, and now I know that claim was an underestimation. Crimson has a great character, with obvious flaws, yet just as powerful good qualities. From chapters 1-55, I could say it was definitely a good story. But from chapter 56 and onward, the story just skyrocketed to unbelievable heights. Immaculate storytelling, foreshadowing, and detail. I’m at a loss for words. Never have I written a review on this site before. That streak ends now. Congratulations. This has become one of the top 3 best fanfics I’ve ever read, and I’ve never even watched Demon Slayer.

Like I said in my previous review , I don’t care much for rwby or demon slayer but this fanfic has great character moments and even greater character development and is a very good read , I have to say there’s huge potential for this fanfic to be one of the best on this website if the author keeps the writing quality at this level 👍 On a personal note : This book’s author ✍️ 📖 has been on a generational run lately , author dropped 10 fire 🔥 chapters in less than 24 hours so I changed my 4.5 stars rating to to a 5 star ⭐️ rating for all that effort that the author put in on this 🗿

I don’t like rwby and I don’t care much for demon slayer but this is a good written story with great character development and I hope it stays at the same quality or even get better .

This is actually really good. one of the better stories I've read on this site. The characters actually grow as people, there's no harem stuff and the plot seems good so far. This story was so fun to read it made me actually want to write a review and even comment. I usually just read a bunch of fics and add them to my library but this one is special i really hope this story gets finished.

If you're going to read it expecting Kokushibo, it's better not to read it, but if you're expecting something else, give it a chance.

For him to read this, I can tell you that this is a very good fanfic that I recommend 100%, it absurdly mixes kokushimo in RWBY. I have no way of expressing how well everything fits together and I'm going to leave it aside, but that's the best thing about the fanfic. Now the bad thing about the writing, the fanfic feels a little rushed in some chapters and I think that it is not given the depth that should be given to certain topics, an example is the art school, it would be an epic state to give more importance to the music in the fanfic and how it affects the protagonist but it is only mentioned a little and then it is mentioned from time to time. Another thing that makes me very angry is that they always emphasize that the protagonist feels like a monster and blah blah blah at the beginning It's okay but brother, don't repeat it to me 70 times in all the chapters, please. But the worst thing about the fanfic is the protagonist's interactions with other characters. Every time he talks to someone, the guy always seems to scold him or have to refute his point of view. The protagonist doesn't seem to be able to start a normal conversation with anyone and if he weren't in RWBY, he would be a disgusting social outcast that no one would approach. In conclusion, the fanfic is a diamond in the rough, but it remains a diamond in the rough. If the author had more experience and polished the fanfic, I put my hands on the fire by saying that this would be the best fanfic there would be on the entire platform.

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