DC X LOTM: A Beyonder in DC

What kind of person would I be if I break the tradition of not giving myself a full 5 star review as a Webnovel author right? That's why I just gave myself one. I think I deserve that at the very least

The concept is great and good at all. But unfortunately this Fic stinks of ChatGPT.

To be honest you should’ve picked one pathway to go, or choose to strive to be a pillar. Like you could start with all the pathways to become the Lord of mysteries, or you could choose all the pathways to become the ancient sun god. That would’ve been better than having all the pathways, since it’s too much to focus on

You should have just made him OC!!!!!!!!!!

This is exactly what I was looking for, there are no LOTM x DC fics except one but that was dropped after 2 chapters. I love you Author san, one question tho, who's the fl. Also please don't drop this because I might actually commit suicide

I've only read up to chapter 5. I'll try to continue reading when I get my bearings. The writing quality is pretty poor. The grammar itself isn't bad, but the story structure is very chaotic. The use of AI is notable, which in itself doesn't seem bad to me. I'm all for using AI as a tool to make some tasks easier. But even AI can't perform miracles, and it's useless if the author's writing is so poor. He constantly talks about the same thing in every chapter, as if he copied a paragraph and asked the AI ​​to reword it so it wouldn't seem so obvious. The author mentions that he forgets a lot of things he's already written because he writes on multiple sites and then merges them together to post them here. But, in my opinion, it's a pretty poor excuse. All of this could be easily fixed if the author would read what he writes and structure the story properly, instead of just winging it and hoping everything will come together. It would be even better if the author had also read the previous chapters; they're so short that some won't even take you five minutes to read. That's why I find it absurd that the author uses the excuse that he forgot something.

Do you know who Beyonder is? . If you know then you know how you destroyed the one of the strongest beings in MCU . He is so powerful at level of Dr Manhattan and you turned him into weakling or you should change the title of the FF.

it's good so far, has lots of potential. though if i had one complaint it'd be the inconsistencies. sometimes the mc's decisions barely make any sense and there's no explanation for them afterwards, idk if it's meant to read like that but it just comes across as confusing. also a lot of phrases are repeated too much, other wise a decent read.

The text is very boring to read, the narrator continues to "monologue" internally, the scenes continue to jump randomly, I can only say that the idea was good, but the development... you have Superman's brother acting like Chunni, without really explaining plans or the development of powers running around acting randomly... I can't even understand why the hell the MC went around acting like a hyperactive villain, clearly when growing slowly is possible and simpler, taking unnecessary risks.

I will rate this as a five star because it's LOTM

The concept and the execution so far is 👌👌⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I’ve been looking for a good lotm read this has been a great start. My biggest hope is you showcase more of the pathways besides the common hunter,fool,error and visionary paths.

ill be honest, i don't really understand how the lord of mysteries power system work but i like OP MCs so i love to see this, i will just search for the power system that they use, like the one fanfic of Red Priest in JJK where i just search what anything means