Saint Of The Forgotten Stars
Author: Liam0709
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In a world of blessed humans, Simon Velthorne was forgotten and ignored by the god yet beloved by the Zodiacs.
[The 24 Zodiacs Chooses you, Simon Velthorne, as The Saint. Will you accept?]
The story of a fallen genius once again ascending to be reborn as a Saint of some distant beings
Simon Velthorne was thrown away by his family due to his unnatural disability and not being able to gather and control mana.
This story follows not only Simon but his allies to as they grow into influential figures and powerful individuals
(if there are any typos please help and point them out so I can quickly fix them)
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The general plot idea of this chapter isn't too bad, though the writing quality could really use some improvements. Currently I'm waiting for the next update, and things are bound to get interesting. The development of the story is a but abrupt, and a lot of things could be tweaked to make each scene a lot more realistic, and lengthen the overall word count. The characters aren't too well introduced, and the description of the scenes lack action and impact. World backround is quite plenty though. Overall, it has potential in itself, just some extra effort.