Naruto: Reborn as Gaara!

I have reed this one before, your name isn't the same or even close to the author of that one, so I assume you are not him and you are kind of stealing this, this fic is on SB with the name "gamer of the desert", it is a good story, but with a lazy ending, all in all it was good enough for me to go "oh another Gara SI, if it's like the other one, I'm in for a good time" when I saw this one, jokes on me, it was the same

Garbage with a whole lot of forced plot. Its an exercise in frustration. Main character is brain damaged or something.

"This thing is trash. I gave it a chance, hoping it would get better over time, but no—it only got worse instead."

i like it. the mc here is not trying to play the system tho and is acting more like a teenager instead of adult. but its good. give it a try

I haven't read it yet, but if you want to make another reincarnation as gaara, make this one where he has eaten the suna suna no mi cause that will make it more crazy.

Very good so far, the author knows quite a bit of the world and it shows. It seems to be an AU but it isnt anything crazy, mainly just Baki beaing more of a bastard than in reality. Main issue with the story is a small part of the writing. Author very much enjoys telling instead of showing. There can be entire chapters without dialogue and often things just kind of happen and Gaara just tells us. Recommendation for the author is to have the writing be a little more interactive by descring his methods and thoughts as he goes. You often just skip past quite a bit of the process as you go. The best example of when you did it correctly was the medical exam but even then you could’ve gone a bit deeper. Give us the feeling of Gaaras chakra, describe the smell, the feel of flesh, all that. This issue mainly pops up in your fight scenes as there isn’t enough build up between actions and it can make your fights feel very choppy.

Not bad. .

for now I give you 5 stars! but I need to see more to make a better assumption

bro the story's good but for God's sake please make shorter paragraphs

I liked it, I read the Scientist fanfic which was good and this one is as well. I enjoyed the 23 chapters and am hoping that more chapters come

The beginning is quite difficult, it seems more like a narration of events than a story in itself, but then it gets better. The story that follows is interesting, the first one about Gaara that I really find interesting, I await future developments in case I need to change this review.

nice....................................