Guy transmigrates in the world of Marvel with the powers of Forge, Sage and Kitty Pryde...
The MC is a good guy, He will try to save as many people as he can. 
MC will kill but won't go around killing every thug.

The first chapter is a bit ruff. I will improve it as i get better at writing.

This is my first time writing, and the starting chapters are a little dumb.

A mind beyond Marvel

ADVENTURE

ROMANCE

WEAKTOSTRONG

OVERPOWERED

TRANSMIGRATION

GENIUS

EVOLUTION

MARVEL

HIGHIQ

ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY

A brilliant fic, keep up the good work and don't drop it.

I won’t lie there’s a lot of potential here the only thing I can say is that you lack experience in writing stories, 1 you need to explain better why something is happening and how it happened an example is the start of the story where you jumped straight into wishing without explaining how he ended up there and why he was chosen for the opportunity 2 you need to make the mc more human, we can’t see what he feels he goes along with things without seeming to experiencing emotions he doesn’t hesitate when making decisions and doesn’t seem to have goals boundaries or dislikes, in the end I have more to say but you might need an editor or someone to proof read you and ask you why the character did something how to better convey things to readers

man i love this book and it is exactly at a pace i like just promise me author you will write hundreads of chapter because there is lack of good original marvel novels

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