I Am Almighty

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OP wishes with Beta MC. Make the MC have a PRIDE like Escanor, his tilting to the SIMP side to much. You have a solid foundation for the MC, use it not waste it. Good writing, just got disappointed, so im sorry for criticizing your work.

This is a classic trash story, with an extremely powerful protagonist and a harem with low-level character building, seriously, to me it seems like the protagonist (and the author) will never talk to a woman and they did everything in the next live (and in the fanfic). But there are positive points, the author calling someone a loser lol, made me laugh sincerely

saw the other reviews and wanted to counter them somewhat, while they have some valid points its not nearly as bad as they make it sound. my thoughts are that while he is broken and people want more combat focused chapters its fine as long as the character interactions are done correctly although i think there should be more tho but hes in naruto rn so there wont be as much as people want, if you want people to like this fic ur also going to have to limit the harem to an extent cuz nearly all girls so far are into himi say limit naruto world to tsunade and kaguya nobody wants a pokemon harem as it ruins the story quality. the story should also be a little faster paced as its multiversal and being bound to one world for too long can be boring so i suggest mc traveling to other worlds in-between certain events but stay main story between 2-3 worlds at a time so its not all over the place and flows at the right pace mc should only bring actually harem members between worlds once they know all abt him and are official. i dont recall ur exact worlds but i recommend keeping it between mid-high ranking worlds with the exception of harry potter as that verse has a few things mc could do thats not combat related. my recommendations are (dragon ball z, mcu au, dc, bleach, god of highschool, dxd, fate, percy jackson) with other verses being short stops and establishing one verse as a main base of operations for awhile. i can have more recommendations on routes to take and other crap but i dont want to put in the effort yet as most authors dont want to hear it

Will he bring his harem members when he travels to another world?

this is something different a agood different so i hope the author will make many many more chapters

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