Hey readers, This is my first attempt to write anything. So I started with movie most would be familiar with. I hope you like this.
I don't own any right to Harry Potter and Marvel or any other references I would use in this story. I just wrote for fun purpose. I hope you like it
*I don't know how to remove this cover and the cover i want to upload is not uploading successfully*
amazing start 👏👏 , good character building , nice story it has amazing potential
overall a decent story minor issues that when doing a rewrite/edited version will fix easy chapters need to be longer cause right now they are to small I'd that means less updates that's fine as long as the pacing of the story isn't messed up which it's starting to feel like with the short chaps
I love the story in general but could you try being less dramatic all the time it's good sometimes but you do it way too much
Love the story so far some mistakes where made in the writing but otherwise good work