As Aizen in Naruto and Joined a Chat Group
What if Aizen Sōsuke descended into the world of Naruto?
An Ran finds himself in the Ninja World — playing the role of the mastermind Aizen. To fully unlock his character’s potential, he joins the Akatsuki under the name Aizen Sōsuke. Just as he begins his infiltration, a mysterious invitation pops up:
You’ve been invited to the Dimensional Chat Group.
And that’s when chaos begins.
Dimensional Chat Log:
The Actor: Hey guys, I’m Aizen. Just joined. Newbie here.
Konan : Welcome! Funny timing — Obito brought in a new recruit too.
Gintoki : Wait, a new recruit? Isn’t Itachi supposed to join in like... two years?
Konan : Not Itachi. He says he’s Aizen Sosuke. Claims his strongest illusion is Kyōka Suigetsu. Then he pulls out a sword like he’s some kind of samurai. Totally bizarre, right?
Gintoki : ???
Sawamura Spencer Eriri : ???
The story is really confusing. I don't know if some of the sentences or even entire chapters are lost in the translation or what. In one scene, Konan is talking to him, in the next scene, she's having a chat with the chat members. And no, time does not stop while someone is conversing in the chat. In one scene, he has already defected from Konoha and is attacked by Orochimaru. In the next scene, he's showing Konon his laboratory in the Pure World (like, why even), and then in the scene after that, he's suddenly back in Konoha, talking with the Hokage and the elders as if he never defected in the first place. Perhaps it's a clone of his, but it's never really explained, so the reader is just left confused about what is going on. It's all sorts of confusing. Which is disappointing, as I thought that the story had some potential. But after a point, the story just becomes unreadable. The fact that most of the chat group members are people that I've not even heard about doesn't help either.
Way too much useless talk in chat, they are so many timeskip in the story and miss the most important but we get the useless chat log ? That story became really really boring. It had potential, but next time choose carrefully the characters you want to introduce in your story and think about what they bring to the story. -The writing is ok(5/5) -Story Developement is existant only at the beginning (2/5l -Character design is mid (3/5) -The uptdate is fast but has no substance (3/5) -There is not really a world background at this point(1/5) That is my review, I tried to not be too harsh, I really took my time to give that story a chance but it just has no point to exist anymore. Please author, read this and learn what you can. You have a lot of potential.
The author is well done!!! Keep up the good work!!! Very interesting. The main thing is not to abandon this fanfiction!! And it would be cool to reveal more features of the system, add more characters.
I don't write reviews often, but this is a great fanfic! No glaring grammar issues, interesting plot, and fun story overall!
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MC revealing that he has another system to the members of the group chat is one of the worst decisions the author has ever made and after reading the fanfic to that point I lost all the interest I had This has to be the biggest fumble done by the author
This is the olny aizen fic I found where he feels like the real thing.
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basically this is a good story but with very very bad translation the character names can change at any time