After the battle, Accelerator was lost in another world. How will he return home?
The story is passable for now. The relationship between Ayla and Chloe was done quite poorly — it seems like you were rather lost at that point. Hopefully, you’ll improve and continue writing.
The story is passable for now. The relationship between Ayla and Chloe was done quite poorly — it seems like you were rather lost at that point. Hopefully, you’ll improve and continue writing.