As Lex Luthor's Son in Young Justice/DC With Archangel Grace
To be born anew...
One would think it a blessing, but to me for the longest it was a curse.
A mighty soul they called me, and I was - I certainly still am.
For I was a soul that the dying grace of a fallen archangel latched onto.
I was reborn with might virtually unending, yet it was still a curse.
I was born too strong. My body could not handle my strength, and it fell into a deep sleep.
A sleep that was only physical, for my soul did not rest.
There was only darkness for so long, and were it not for the echoing hyms of Heaven that my grace hummed I would have perhaps gone mad.
That is, until like a dim pinprick a light began to appear within the darkness. It grew brighter day by day, year by year, and with it, I could hear more of the world beyond.
I could... I could hear a man calling to me, his voice a incoherent murmer, yet always recognizeable. Always there, everyday.
Until finally one day I could understand him.
Lex Luthor. My father. His son.
That is who I was. Who I will be.
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(Author note: This is about a guy, from our world, reborn in DC, but with the grace of Lucifer as he died against Michael!Dean in Supernatural Season 13 episode 22.
He was born in a body that couldn't handle his strength and was in a coma for 19 years, till he finally awakes.
He's very overpowered, but can't really exercise it, since using too much power will destroy his body, and leave him only as an archangel that can't interact with the physical world.
This story will have a lot of slice of life in it, action will be there, but real heavy fighting isn't gonna be a focus as he can't besides in special circumstances.
Though, do know, he is Luthor's son.
He is a anti-hero and not a hero, as he is the son of a villain, and an archangel who is quite cold to the world when he sees things from such a higher perspective, so will act only in ways that he wants and not out of a sense of duty fo help others or the like.
There are more things to say, so please read the auxiliary chapter, well, I hope to see you all later,
Bye!)
At the author's request, here's a review :) (Let's be clear, this is my opinion and I don't intend to offend or insult anyone.) Honestly, it's not possible to write a proper review yet. So far, only very random things have happened, there hasn't been any world or character development. While 30 chapters sounds like a lot, nothing has happened, and what could be interesting is all happening behind the scenes. You've done too many time skips, and a lot of things have been developed "behind the scenes." Honestly, you could do better. By lengthening the part of the MC in a coma meeting Death, and developing Lex while you're at it. By better explaining and demonstrating the development of the relationship between MC and Cassandra. By better developing the MC at university. Another thing is Superboy's personality. You made him look too similar to Roberta from your other fic, when in reality he acted like a lost child in JJ. (He wasn't analytical or calm at all; he has a reckless personality.) Honestly, you rushed things too much. While the development seems good, it's very random and happens too quickly. so for me is: Writing Quality: 4 Stability of Updates: 5 Story Development: 1 Character Design: 1 World Background: 1 Total 2.4 PS: You should clarify what kind of reality you're doing the FF in. In some versions of the comics, each universe has its own Hell, meaning each universe has its own Lucifer, Asmodeus, Baal, etc. In others, Hell is multiversal, and they are unique, meaning there is only one Lucifer in the entire multiverse.
At this point we just have to give you a licence to cook because you're a certified chef
You have too many projects, and you have already started to slow down considerably on some! Refocus to finish those already launched! Thank you in advance
Another amazing ff from you well as always ig. i hope you won't drop it after making me attached to the story or...
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I’ve read your other Lucifer fanfic and loved it. Reading this one is interesting and I am liking it so far.
Peak Peak Peeeeaaakkkk! It starts a little slow, with a side of cringe and a single plot hole but that all becomes irrelevant when the light bringer starts aura farming. Trust me this is peak.
At first I wanted to read a chapter or 2 to see if it's good but then I saw who it was made by so at that moment I knew this is gonna be..................
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Excellent fanfic, the interaction btw the mc and his entourage feel real, and his not arrogant with his friends and family, he’ll he’s not arrogant even with strangers wich make him more lovable. Good job authors
Really like mc isn’t pure evil and the story is more focused on the supernatural side of dc then just the hero’s and villains
I already love this so far I hope in the future that we will see the mc help his fathers and the light maybe having a chat with Klarion and Dr.Fate but It would be pretty intresting if the Mc sees superboy as his brother that will secretly protect him from anything too life threatening to his life. And I would like to to see or read the interaction the Mc would have with the Justice League and the Team the Junior Justice league also would be pretty awesome if he encounters the other Gods like Darkseid with his generals and daughter next the New Genisis gods and the other Gods like Zeus the Greek Gods and Asgardians meeting Odin, Thor, Loki maybe meeting The Presence.
It's just so peak, it's sad it comes at the cost of the authors previous works being dropped but I think this is the one that can go the distance! it's got good writing and fun concepts. it shines when it's dealing with heaven and demons but it's weakness it's simple character interactions. I think the worst written character so far is Lex Luthor, very ooc but hey if you can get other that it's peak.