I fell in Marvel Multicross with a Strange Shop

1st time seeing this kind of fic, I'll be seeing more of your Work! and also don't Overworked yourself!👍🏻😁👍🏻

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The concept of the fic is interesting, but the story is very confusing, with a lot of things happening very quickly and characters being introduced and leaving the scene so quickly that none of them seem to matter, not even the MC. Right at the beginning, we had 3 or 4 chapters that were secondary character POVs in which the MC barely appeared. Before the story even begins, we already have the story focusing on secondary characters more than the MC and these same characters barely appeared before disappearing from the story. In short, although the idea of ​​the fic is very good, it is all very rushed, as if someone took an episode of something and cut everything down to the most important 5 minutes, removing everything else.

Pretty good story can't wait to see what other transformations the MC will unlock in the future this story is truly a wonder since with all the different world's mix into it. It's always easy to not know what's going to come next especially the items in the shop and how the prices very from different things.

Its a great book but theres too much going on at once to realistically enjoy it Personally I'd recommend rewriting it but removing Marvel and either supernatural or Percy Jackson Leaving Doctor Who, Ben 10 and either Percy Jackson or Supernatural cuz lets be real This is too big of a job for any human to write though you've done excellent nonetheless so far Throwing Marvel in doesn't really work with How Fury is and how marvel Military is? meh I'm sure you get it Marvel is a great thing no doubt same with all the others But crossovers can get tricky to be realistic while still crossing over

........................................................ I haven't read the chapters yet, but I liked the introduction and the story worlds. I hope you continue with it. This is a real comment......................................

this review is for encouragement... it's a great Idea 💡 don't drop it. i hope you could complete this fic.

So far, I'm enjoying how the author is connecting things, and the progression feels very consistent. I also appreciate how the shop is well-developed and well-implemented without being intrusive to the reading experience

Man i really! really!!! Like your Fic here, but thats 2/2 massive mistakes that would have made me drop any other novel. 1.leaving the order breathing to athena but i got past that bcoz he is in a rage mode but dont understand y still its in her hands 2. Unleashing braniac while still not his fault, he could have combined with braniac and raphael to remedy it, i am sure as this combination is more than enough for any version of braniac Plz do something about it

Did a good job in mixing different worlds together.