Fifth Dimension

I really like this novel, but i've got the impression that the hero is far too immature. The reaction he has with a few kids is puerile, it make me a bit sad if we take account that he is 30's.

Really like the stories premise, enjoying it greatly so far. Hopefully it gets to the future where the alluded to importance of the game is revealed.

I going to need more chapter to get my blood pumping or should I imaging the whole thing into my head which will keep going but it nice;you got this author when I am older and start my own novel it will be so much hype ! Do a great job and maybe you might bring alots of stuff for us to read like anything just keep working do not stop

Is this story on Hiatus. Is it going to be updated? Quite enjoyed it, please update synopsis with whats going on. People are still awarding stones with no update for a month. Its a good sign.

Despite the seemingly inconspicious synopsis, the story is written quite well, with some hints of mystery mixed in and a natural development.

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Liking the novel so far. The grammar is great I only spotted a few small mistakes. The author is great at world building, there are many questions that are slowly getting answered and I find myself looking forward to what is happening next a lot. There isn't much filler and the story keeps progressing at a steady pace so far. I definitely recommend this novel.

I'm really enjoying the novel, but it seems pointless that the reincarnation literally did not give any advantage to the mc .

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I like the story, the only things I do not like are the facts that he is not the only reincarnation anymore and the stupid love triangle. I seriously feel several chapters worth were wasted by introducing a love triangle as to me, they don't add anything to the story and it was too late in its introduction to make it help in drawing in a female crowd. The romance aspect of the story is poorly constructed which just further lowers its value. I suppose it is done in an effort to do character building but it seems to have the opposite effect. The drama makes the MC seem more and more bland. I do like how humanity isn't alone in the universe, and the way the story is set up to evolve from there, with infighting between factions and aliens.

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