The Twin System

This seems like it will be an entertaining story and it is a more unique system novel as it's a system combined between the twins. I look forward to more chapters.

My question when writing this story was how can I have both a boy and girl main character. Basically, if you like twins, this story is for you. If you like fighting and romance, this story is for you. And if you have any questions or comments, feel free to ask me down below.

Hello, I am kcrgabin.I like your novel, though I just noticed something too. My novel had the similar premise of an mc splitting into a male and female body. Haha, now I have another comrade in twin body genre! My female and male bodies both like girls, how about yours?

If you wonder, no, they won't be talking at the same time, finish each others sentences or do any of the iconic twin shenanigans :/ Also it seems like author will stick to OUR worlds sexual morals regarding MC which is a pretty safe approach and won't alienate as many people as exploring what it would mean IF one person with two body could exist

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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I dont wnat to be kritic. I like the idea of twin system, it sounds interesting but autor doesnt exploil all potential. Story is quick, almost no troble or interesting moments where there must think for themself and do something. When they want something they throw it on system SPOILER and when sistrer is attacked, she at first run around, but when her brother get to her she just let monstrer disappear END OF SPOILER. Sister is also from beginning stronger and clever than her brother, which is hot-headed boy which goes after girls. To me it looks unbalanced. Also reader doesnt get almost no information regarding the world, how they cultivate and what cultivation art they get reader know after couple chapters where it is mentioned. Also there arent many conversation, no matter if it is telepatic, between siblings or with/ between other people.

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