Good writing quality, although a few oddities in the writing could be noticed.
For now I can't say about updates.
Story development, it's too soon for an objective judgement, but it feels good.
Same for character design.
World Background, you could have described Heaven more extensively.
I will make another review at chapter 30.
6 years ago
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cshupian11
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Good writing quality, although a few oddities in the writing could be noticed. For now I can't say about updates. Story development, it's too soon for an objective judgement, but it feels good. Same for character design. World Background, you could have described Heaven more extensively. I will make another review at chapter 30.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.