Good writing quality, although a few oddities in the writing could be noticed.
For now I can't say about updates.
Story development, it's too soon for an objective judgement, but it feels good.
Same for character design.
World Background, you could have described Heaven more extensively.
I will make another review at chapter 30.
Good writing quality, although a few oddities in the writing could be noticed. For now I can't say about updates. Story development, it's too soon for an objective judgement, but it feels good. Same for character design. World Background, you could have described Heaven more extensively. I will make another review at chapter 30.