Hamzah, it is me Afiq. I am telling you your story is HORRIBLE I SAY!
HORRIBLE! WHAT KIND OF PLOT LINE IS THIS! YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT YOUR GRAMMAR AND BATTLE SHIPS. Well, to be nice, I would say this is fine.
5 years ago
1
Raven_komododragon
There are more grammar mistakes then there are words in this book there is no character development, the spelling and grammar is garbage and the author seems to know little to nothing about battleships, the army, or how to operate a crew
6 years ago
1
Tonyorobsky
Terrible writing style, terrible characters, terrible background
Each chapters are more like a bad summary of what should be a chapter
The author doesn't seem to know much about battleships
Hamzah, it is me Afiq. I am telling you your story is HORRIBLE I SAY! HORRIBLE! WHAT KIND OF PLOT LINE IS THIS! YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT YOUR GRAMMAR AND BATTLE SHIPS. Well, to be nice, I would say this is fine.
There are more grammar mistakes then there are words in this book there is no character development, the spelling and grammar is garbage and the author seems to know little to nothing about battleships, the army, or how to operate a crew
Terrible writing style, terrible characters, terrible background Each chapters are more like a bad summary of what should be a chapter The author doesn't seem to know much about battleships