In Another World With Common Sense

Writing Quality: 3/5 Average or readable enough, it lacks a bit of editing especially in the first chapters where the "i" is not capitalized example: "Where i am? is this a dream? 'Someone kidnapped me? No, there is no reason to throw me here then. Do i sleepwalked? No, i can't reach that far just by sleepwalking.' Stability of Updates: 2/5 UPDATE MORE! Like seriously it needs a daily update. Story Development: 4/5 I won't say it's the best but where can you find something so unique as a Slice of life wuxia? Where the main character is neither the antagonist or someone special more like a bystander type of character. Character Design: 3/5 Too be honest the only thing this story lacks is characters hopefully there will be romance in this since it can get boring really fast without any stimulation regarding relationships. World Background: 3/5 Average enough but not bad. Total score: 3/5 Highly recommended even if my rating is a bit low, the plot is interesting, the writing even though not edited can be readable enough. In the later chapters, it seems to be fixed still you should edit the first few chapters with editing tools like Grammarly.

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Love the story so far it's really funny and it make me think of real Chinese cultivation novels how so far it makes good points about it that makes me laugh a lot like really that what it's all about and you saying it that way make it more fun and comical about the whole story I really can't wait for more the author is very great at what he does I hope more stories like this come out because I'm really looking forward to it and people you should read it if you have not what are you doing here reading this go look at story come on go read it what are still doing here waste your life reading this what me to do some I'm not here to Intertan you the story is so go click the read button a enjoy something wonderful go read you'll love it go read you'll love it go read you'll love it go read you'll love it go read you'll love it go read you'll love it

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Overall good but the chapters are short when i start a chapter i already find myself at the end then i get sad because its over as soon as it started.

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The story is good, pacing is too, power up good, still no waifu material to be found, not too fast paced haha there is even a reference anyway all is good except for the update stability not good but its still doable its just that waiting a story this good hurts especially in a good chapter i recommend yall read this......

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i really loved it aspecialy the pacing fast quality ass pacing with a competent mc that is not an arrogant asshole nor chasing down some harem for stupid reasons and just a genuinly nice fic liked how you used other light novels to create the world more in your favor so that we imagine but cant say its like a certain thing which allows you to throw of our expektation sometimes

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