Q: What would happen if the student council president of the most prestigious school of the country and a semi shut-in, potential flunker, game addict meet?
A: They get teleported as minions to the land of dawn.
So is the story of Cl Lark, the student council president of Idsidi School of the Elite, and Kate Claver, a hardcore gamer. What adventures await the duo?
I'll update every now and then.
some characters are copied from other games such as dota.
Comment on the review section which character you want to be on the story.
You deserve to be one of top 3. Great story, its unique one comedy was there in your concept. goodluck on this competition. I started to add your story at my library. 👍😊
To be honest, the lack of punctuation marks and proper capitalization is killing me. XD Anyway, I see some potential here in the story, but I think you really need to slow down the pacing and not make it too cliche. Estes immediately saying that they will grant the teenagers omnipotence? That's rather cheesy, if you ask me. Good luck! Oh, and can you review my story in return? Criticisms allowed! https://***.webnovel.com/book/13796941806379005/Mobile-Legends%3A-The-Untold-Story-(515-Contest)
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